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Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 562 Karma: 15 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #15 on Apr 14, 2008, 5:40am » | |
that's alright what ever comes first, i should really focus on the star wars and harry potter crossover before everything else, ah!
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Joined: Feb 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 140 Location: My writing space Karma: 1 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #16 on Apr 16, 2008, 7:11am » | |
im terrible i keep starting new fics and just not finishing them, i have too many ideas haha, honestly ive got about 6 stories on the go at once! its mad! i think im going to have to make a list of my top priorety ones!
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Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 562 Karma: 15 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #17 on Apr 17, 2008, 4:31am » | |
oh my god that is like me! we're the same i have so many ideas and then i struggle to work with them all. here's a hint, organise them, one chapter each and then work from there-from ones who are near the end to the ones whoa restarting off, cause when i was doing a chance romance i had crossovers as well and i was putting them on hold for the chance romance one, love that one lol
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Joined: Feb 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 140 Location: My writing space Karma: 1 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #18 on Apr 18, 2008, 9:16pm » | |
i took your advice, organized the whole thing into chapters and....its done!!! redemptions is finally finished!!! hope you like it!!!!
and dont worry, armageddon/star wars will soon follow =]
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Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 562 Karma: 15 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #19 on Apr 19, 2008, 5:42am » | |
wow, i've never had anyone take my advice before it's nice to feel that someone did that
i did like it, i liked it alot, a real lot! there were parts where i was gasping and really into it, and you ended really well! wow all those children! wow! and the interactions between obi wan and dorme, well done and how Anakin told Padme and Dorme they were pregnant that was great!
love all of it, glad you posted it all! well done
i'll be here waiting for it
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Joined: Feb 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 140 Location: My writing space Karma: 1 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #20 on Apr 22, 2008, 1:11pm » | |
yay! im soo glad you liked it! i was pretty nervous about posting the ending, but hopefully it worked well =]
yeah i know, lots of children, but i thought thats probably what they all would've wanted so, they got it!!!
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Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 562 Karma: 15 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #21 on Apr 24, 2008, 4:41am » | |
oh man that was a great load! i love it, keep it coming, the whole part with obi wan chasing anakin with the blaster that was funny! hehehe, very well done, aw anakin got fired and padme loves him, that's sweet, love it
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Joined: Feb 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 140 Location: My writing space Karma: 1 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #22 on Apr 25, 2008, 5:16am » | |
glad you liked it!!!
theres plenty moe on the way, in the mean time, keep the anastasia one coming, i watched the movie yesterday and it got me all excited to read your version =D
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Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 562 Karma: 15 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #23 on Apr 26, 2008, 6:00am » | |
oh keep updating the crossover i love it, it's getting really good, love all the funny bits and the Anakin and Padme romantic bits, how he proposed to her was beautiful
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Joined: Feb 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 140 Location: My writing space Karma: 1 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #24 on Apr 26, 2008, 8:15am » | |
i know its so sweet, i love that part of the movie!
ill have more soon =D
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Joined: Jan 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 562 Karma: 15 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #25 on Apr 29, 2008, 5:07am » | |
hey hey, love the crossover really turning out to be a good one can't wait for more
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Joined: Feb 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 140 Location: My writing space Karma: 1 |  | Re: Comments for The Redemption Begins « Reply #26 on Apr 30, 2008, 9:58am » | |
im almost finished the next couple of chapters, ill update soon =D
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