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« Reply #90 on Jul 28, 2007, 12:11am » | ![[Quote]](http://s1.images.proboards.com/buttons/quote.gif) |
She only knows that something is up... but Anakin is still under the guise of Skye Nairn, and Leia doesn't know who he really is. She just confided in Padme in hopes of coming to terms with a past she doesn't realize that "Skye" and his wife are even connected to.
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Anakin's going to set out after Leia... but she still must learn the truth... THE END IS NEAR!
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« Reply #91 on Aug 4, 2007, 1:04pm » | |
So she still doesn't know? I can't wait for her to find out!
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« Reply #92 on Aug 11, 2007, 10:21am » | |
Together in their love for Leia, they really are two great guys. Love how you portray them.
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« Reply #93 on Aug 12, 2007, 10:56am » | |
I hope by 'the end' you don't mean the end for somebody:( This is emotional and exciting. You bring depth to Han that the movies never show. Very nice dialogue and character interaction. I'm worried about Leia, and both of them. I want her to know who Skye is, but I don't want anybody to die. You sure keep it exciting. More please.
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« Reply #94 on Sept 1, 2007, 9:25am » | |
Great plot and dialogue here! So much intertwined! Palps takes their force power with ysalarmi injections and now they must face their true feelings. Leia must now struggle with possibly being turned, and Anakin admits he's not "Skye" but the big revelation is yet to come? Keep it coming!
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« Reply #95 on Sept 3, 2007, 7:36am » | |
Wow, I seem to have missed whole chapters of this and, by their posting dates, can't even claim I was on vacation as an excuse. Sorry about that!
Why do I have the feeling that many of Palpatine's taunts to Leia are going to backfire on him (i.e. "then you think your father is weak minded?")? As is his forcibly withholding Anakin's identity until HE is ready to unleash the information? Leia does need to come to the brink of darkness herself in order to understand her father properly; otherwise she will never be able to accept him no matter what "Skye" did or did not do - you're unfolding this masterfully. Looking forward to seeing how it plays out ...
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« Reply #96 on Sept 8, 2007, 4:12pm » | |
Oh! Wonderful action scene, I love how the end came for Palps! But no, not Anakin, not now, I wanted to punch Leia for telling him not to talk, it may be his last breath. Let him have it, Luke would have, like he did in ROTJ. Is it not too late to save him? She seems to be able to help. Could we still have a happy ending?
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« Reply #97 on Sept 13, 2007, 1:50pm » | |
ohhh very good! what an intense chapter with palps! good for leia, she killed him! so does she have any idea that skye is really her father? more! soon, please!
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« Reply #98 on Sept 15, 2007, 10:20am » | |
She knows! yay! Why did she run?
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« Reply #99 on Sept 16, 2007, 9:01am » | |
Wow, that was an emotional ride - you sure know how to squeeze out all the emotion from the scenes you write. I especially like the parallels you drew between his dying with Leia this time and how he died in Luke's arms on the Death Star. And her reacting with the denial that he would have done and him quoting his mother about it. Loved the disappearance on death, too, though I should have been expecting it, and the simultaneous erasing of his pseudo identity. She knows now, and more yet still to come!!!
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« Reply #100 on Sept 23, 2007, 4:44pm » | |
I didn't want him to die! With no body there's no proof, or was he ever really alive? That's something I was never sure of. I guess it will all come out. Now I'm concerned for Leia.
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« Reply #101 on Sept 26, 2007, 8:46pm » | |
i was shocked when he died too, didn't see that coming, now let's hope Leia's not in more trouble hehehe, how will she cope?
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