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Post by Steller's Jay on Aug 28, 2006 16:29:13 GMT -5
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Post by padme52 on Sept 2, 2006 5:14:22 GMT -5
I am delighted to see this story posted on this site. Anakin and Padme are wonderful parents .
The twins sound so adorable.
This first chapter is very interesting,,
Please post again soon.
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Post by Astrid on Sept 7, 2006 10:39:21 GMT -5
I am also happy to see it here. I will read it and comment on this site now!
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Post by padme52 on Sept 7, 2006 22:02:33 GMT -5
I really love the Anakin relates to his apprentice, Sikka Doron . I love your portrayal of him as a Master Jedi.
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Post by arie on Sept 11, 2006 16:55:20 GMT -5
I'm loving it so far!
Anakin and Sikka are a great Master-padawan team. And the scenes about the Skywalker family are wonderful, what splendid parenting! Applause for Ani and Padme!
I'm worried about Obi-Wan though... he must've fallen, that's why Anakin dreamed that...
Please post more soon!!!!!!
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Post by Astrid on Sept 13, 2006 10:22:07 GMT -5
This is terrible what's going to happen to Oren in there?
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Post by padme52 on Sept 13, 2006 19:08:51 GMT -5
The Anakin Padme communications are great , I love them.
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Post by crystalcat on Sept 30, 2006 9:52:49 GMT -5
I just read your latest installment (I mean the latest one - on another board). Everything seems like it is about to blow wide open - he's getting his Force-sensitivity back, which means that his memory will likely follow. And then what will he do? I know what Anakin will try to talk him into, but will he listen?
I've got to also think that the Force deliberately turned off his Force-sensitivity and gave him amnesia so he would not be adversely affected by Anakin's ordeal (since they had a mental connection), and not have to agonize over why his Force-sense left him. Which would mean that it also placed Janelle in his path...
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Post by Steller's Jay on Sept 30, 2006 17:29:34 GMT -5
Hmmm, yes, let's see what Anakin will try to do.  And the Force does provide, doesn't it? ;D (I'll be posting the rest of the chapters soon.) |
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Post by arie on Oct 1, 2006 19:50:54 GMT -5
You have me trapped in suspense. Please update soon, I'm on the edge of my seat. I wanna know what happens next!
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Post by Astrid on Oct 6, 2006 16:46:17 GMT -5
I want him to get his memory and force sense back but I don't want him to lose Janelle!
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Post by padme52 on Oct 13, 2006 17:52:41 GMT -5
This is a very good story and I hope you post the rest of the chapters very soon.
I can hardly wait to see what happens next.
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Post by Steller's Jay on Oct 13, 2006 19:56:59 GMT -5
All of the chapters I've written so far are posted. I'm working on Chapter 22 now.
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Post by Annie on Oct 15, 2006 9:55:28 GMT -5
I like the Obi-Wan storyline a lot but it's good to see a lot of Anakin again, and back with Padme! I'm glad he took her with him. It was great to see the council acknowledge the children of the chosen one, that's how it should have been! Luke will be a Jedi, what of Leia, politics? And Toller, he really showed them something. It's good he's with his own kind now, this will be good for him and the Jedi! Sorry to hear Yoda feels he is dying. If he does, who will replace him?
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Post by Steller's Jay on Oct 15, 2006 14:03:59 GMT -5
Well, Yoda died when Luke was what, 22? So, I thought he might start to feel like he's on the downhill slide. After all, he is almost 900 years old! Plus, he can foresee things, so perhaps he foresaw his own death.
Assuming I do more sequels (or maybe just one), I'll probably include Yoda's death. Should be a momentous event, if only because he has been a Jedi for so long.
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