adea
Jedi Knight
Brothers in arms
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Post by adea on Jun 23, 2008 12:11:16 GMT -5
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh i absolutely adore that episode!!!! I cant wait for it to be put up!!! yeah i know, the dark knight and star is born are still needing to be finished, but im having major writers block with them both!!! I've written a couple of chapters for each of them but im still not satisfied you know! just saw you're review for Worlds apart, this story is gonna be a monster to write, but im hoping it'll be good, as always your praise is keeping me going especiallly when there seems to be a reviewer who deems it okay to critisize me but not actually point out what they like about my story! I mean, im fine with constructive critisism, but they could atleast point out what they do like! anyways, I actually wanted to run this by you about worlds apart. I was thinking of maybe having Lumiya having a bit of a thing for Vader, but he doesnt reciprocate the feelings, then maybe having Lumiya become jealous of Grace, and trying to kill her, or maybe even actually killling her, and having Sidious plan all of this as a way of further driving Vader into darkness. what do you think? to cheesy? let me know, and again, thank you for the wonderful reviews
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Jun 24, 2008 4:59:25 GMT -5
that's cool i am writing that episode and i am laughing as i go it's funny as lol-one question, shold i keep Sabe's last name as Walker to have some continuity, let me know
any way i can help with those stories let me know cause you help me and i help you. oh i read that one review i hate it when people can't just enojy the story and have to point out everything you don't have to worry with that aboutme cause i love all the stories and never critize anything. thanks that is so nice to say i am glad i keep you going and u keep me going. i get to work on those stories lol
not cheesy at all, love all of it beautiful, ah ah! Vader is Ben! i am the smarts [right?] lolkill her, do you want me to cry cause it will work lol any way i love the story and iwll enjoy it anyway keep going. and when u write a star is born, if you are stuck, refer back to Hercules [disney's one] if u need to i do that and it works lol
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adea
Jedi Knight
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Post by adea on Jun 24, 2008 10:57:10 GMT -5
haha i couldnt keep the secret very well, ben is Vader! oh what will Anakin say when he finds out!! Im excited to write that part!
Yeah I would just keep it, it actually has quite a ring to it, although, it is a bit close to Skywalker, so I dont know....I would probably just keep it so she seems more like Karen.
Atleast my other reviews are good, everyone else seems to be enjoying it, so what the hey!
You know what, I think i'll do that, I have the week off so ill watch the film tonight and make a few notes for possible plots. Thanks for the idea!
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Jun 25, 2008 5:09:06 GMT -5
u r very welcome, it works for me and hope that you will find it easier, and hope there is anything i can help with let me know cause u help me i help you.
i know i really enjoy it and keep going cause i'll give you all the good reviews you need and you know i will lol
thanks i know thats the hard part but i have to keep some part from the show too i am hoping to finish it by tomorrow or friday i watched the rest today and was laughing and so i hope it is well received
yes i know smart alright, still loving the story and i will enjoy reading that part as you will enjoy reading it
oh and one more thing, when you see the new will and grace crossover up, there may a surprise of some kind with it, not saying what it is but you may be surprised with what i've done
and i've fnished the harry potter crossover finally! and hope you can check it all out
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adea
Jedi Knight
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Post by adea on Jun 26, 2008 9:08:33 GMT -5
ooohhhh im very excited for the will and grace twist! im going on holiday, so i wont be able to read it when its first posted, but as soon as i get back ill be straight on here! also, i wont be posting any new chapters for two weeks but ive just posted another Worlds Apart chapter, hope its okay! and ill check out HP crossover as soon as i get back anywho, keep on writing, i expect lots to read when i get back
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Jun 28, 2008 4:51:12 GMT -5
oh man, that is so not cool i can't wait that long i want to know what you thought cause its posted and up for a tease lol. but still hoping that you will be here to talk and read stories like i will be with yours cause i love them i am sure it will be better than okay it was awesome!
u keep writing as well and i want alot of updates when you come back keep thinking of ideas while u are away
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Post by chenshui on Jun 18, 2011 1:13:14 GMT -5
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