adea
Jedi Knight
Brothers in arms
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Post by adea on Mar 29, 2008 16:29:03 GMT -5
Please feel free to comment on my story.
It's my first fan fic so all constructive critisism is welcome =]
enjoy!
adea xxx
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Mar 31, 2008 4:04:15 GMT -5
love it love it love it love it, really good, i was getting all misty eyed at some parts but so happy he was redeemed that was a great story
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Mar 31, 2008 4:40:04 GMT -5
hey heyi love both aprt 1 and 2 love it, very well done, love it love it love it, can't wait for more! well done
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adea
Jedi Knight
Brothers in arms
Posts: 140
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Post by adea on Mar 31, 2008 10:01:59 GMT -5
thank you =D
god i was soooo nervous, i know they're abit short but i didnt want to ramble too much haha
thanks im soo glad you enjoyed them, it means alot! its the first time anyones read something of mine, so my confidence is now sky high haha
adea xxx
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 1, 2008 3:42:14 GMT -5
i know that feeling i've been there, hehe, i was so nervous for my first story and after the review is really made me happy
i did love the stories and can't wait for more expecially that crossover
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Post by Annie on Apr 5, 2008 22:16:13 GMT -5
I just finished part 1! I love it! I am so glad you came here and so proud to add this story to our collection!
When we first started out writing alternate endings 3 years ago, I was always amazed at how each different person had a different angle of the same idea (Anakin saved) and how they were all unique and all good. Then after time went on it kind of ran dry and people didn't write anymore. I thought the AU ending ideas were over. But guess what? You have done it! You came up with yet another unique and interesting angle for the healing, Padme living, Empire falling, everything! Just brilliant! Very well written and interesting. The elves healing him, and him saving the daughter in return, great! That was really a new way to do it! You had said you were worried because it had been done before, but don't worry, not like this! You managed to create yet another completely different telling of Anakin's healing and redemption and I like it! I am really sorry most of our old members aren't around anymore because I know they'd like it too. Never count out that they may drop my now and then. As long as the stories are up, somebody will always read them.
Good job! I'll start on part II soon!
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adea
Jedi Knight
Brothers in arms
Posts: 140
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Post by adea on Apr 6, 2008 15:10:55 GMT -5
thank you so much! it means alot that you like my stories, ive always loved writing, and its really important to me that you like my stories. thank you =] i really hope you enjoy part 2, and also part's 3 and 4 when i finally finish them!
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 7, 2008 4:10:05 GMT -5
i love that crossover and you dedicated it to me, aw! i thought that was so sweet! i love this and i love the end where he yells 'god dammit anakin!" that was funny. keep it going this is a great story
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 8, 2008 4:56:01 GMT -5
yeah yeah yeah, do more do more, i love it! he found out about Anakin and Padme, whoops. more please
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adea
Jedi Knight
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Post by adea on Apr 8, 2008 15:30:30 GMT -5
ill post a few more chapters tomorrow =]
i skipped ahead and wrote the final scenes, i was tearing up a little bit writing them haha, and dont forget to keep writing your crossovers, cant wait for more!
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 8, 2008 23:43:58 GMT -5
oh man, if you tear up writing them then i'll tear up reading it, oh please add more, i love the story and if you have any more ideas for me let me know, i'm still looking for out for more
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 10, 2008 5:12:14 GMT -5
wow! that was amazing, i was really into the story, this is now part 3. and i was pulling that Luke would be reddeemd like Anakin was but no he turned! and she died. i was holding back the tears by the end of the story, well done! this is one of my favourite story and i love it and you brought Han in it, yay! well done! got me emotional
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adea
Jedi Knight
Brothers in arms
Posts: 140
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Post by adea on Apr 10, 2008 7:22:34 GMT -5
i know i hated killing her off, but i was listening to better days by the goo goo dolls, and i thought, it cant all have a happy ending yet, coz part 4's on its way, but i was really sad to see her go. dont worry though, part 4 has so many surprises its unreal haha, and i think you'll be happy with the overall ending, but thats all im saying for now  |
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 11, 2008 4:49:15 GMT -5
surprises you say alright love it! alright, keep it coming and that crossover, come onlol
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adea
Jedi Knight
Brothers in arms
Posts: 140
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Post by adea on Apr 13, 2008 6:28:10 GMT -5
i'm on it, i'll abandon the redemtions series for a little while and focus on armageddon =D its almost done, promise!
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