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Post by arie on Apr 23, 2007 17:28:19 GMT -5
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 23, 2007 17:51:10 GMT -5
this was so beautiful, i loved it how u captured the essence and romance of Anakin and Padme
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Post by Astrid on Apr 24, 2007 9:40:49 GMT -5
Beautiful but bittersweet. A well done piece of work though. I liked the part where you describe how she's seeing his eyes, changing, changing back and what she last saw before she passed out. Still so sad....
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Post by sonotyourmom on Apr 24, 2007 14:26:02 GMT -5
i love it arie
simply amazing
is it done? cause you got me so hooked on it i still think theres more teheh well anyways i love it so much
your my personal writer ;D
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Post by arie on Apr 26, 2007 16:28:48 GMT -5
Thanks you everyone! So much! You have no idea how happy I am right now!
Sonot, you let me know if you have any more requests, this was a fun experience!
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Post by crystalcat on Apr 27, 2007 15:43:48 GMT -5
Sorry it took me so long to see this. What a beautiful retelling, from Padme's point of view. And I especially loved it from her point of view within the Force - makes me think that after he died she was right there waiting for him.
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Post by Annie on Apr 27, 2007 21:49:09 GMT -5
I read this days ago but forgot to comment! Excellent job with this request, I loved it. You wrote it so beautifully and emotionally and had so many good ideas. It was sad yet hopeful their love was still alive in the force. Even though it wasn't an alternate it was such a lovely telling of the characters and their feelings, better than movies and way better than EU! You're a great writer!
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Post by arie on May 5, 2007 14:38:07 GMT -5
Thanks so much!
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