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Post by Annie on Dec 22, 2006 20:49:04 GMT -5
This is a very interesting and unique idea, Juli, I don't think I've ever seen a story about a memorial for Padme with Luke and Leia. What will happen next? Will she come back, or will it be a tribute to her? I can't wait to see what you do with this. If it's going to be long, and you have a name for it, I'll make it a regular story category.
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 22, 2006 21:22:09 GMT -5
This is a subject I've toyed with writing about but could never do to my own satisfaction. I'm glad someone has finally tackled Luke & Leia finding their family on Naboo. Hope you write some more of it (and finish) - you definitely have a reader here!
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 24, 2006 17:30:56 GMT -5
very interesting..I have wondered if Luke and Leia would find out about their mother, since they learned of Vader's past..why not their mother's..I really do like it and hope to see more of it.. You've done a great job here.
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Post by juliskywalker on Dec 24, 2006 18:11:16 GMT -5
thanks!! and yeah i was thinking of making it kind of an accident, something that they would now as the story moves forward, and thanks!! with that comments i'll start on finishing more quickly, i would some suggestions for the name tough
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Post by Annie on Dec 24, 2006 19:47:41 GMT -5
I like the way you are having them discuss the past, and her being against Palps. Very good!
So in this story, they don't know who their father is, or they don't know Anakin was Vader, and that one person thinks it might be Obi-Wan? It's going to be interesting to see where you go with this, keep writing!
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Post by juliskywalker on Dec 24, 2006 20:01:14 GMT -5
yes that's it!! i mean all the things that happen in the movie happen before this story, only that now soon they will find out that padme is their real mother, they only don't know who their father, and through the things that will happen to them they will find out again who their real father is
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 24, 2006 20:06:26 GMT -5
I think you should just keep writing it and a name will eventually suggest itself to you. But please do keep writing! I'm loving how this is unfolding, that they're finding out stuff by accident - and even got taken to their mother's home. I'm sure they'll want to find out a lot more after hearing that little tidbit.
It seems you're also leaving the plot open to Padme still being alive, too...? No, don't tell me one way or the other; I'd rather find out in the course of the story.
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 26, 2006 10:12:03 GMT -5
that was really good..that is very interesting..they are learning more and more about their family and suspect Obi-wan is the one who married Amidala..wow..I can't wait to read more of your story..its really good
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Post by Steller's Jay on Dec 26, 2006 13:10:24 GMT -5
Oh, there's an idea for you: Obi-Wan Kenobi marrying Padme! So, they don't know who their father was, and Luke is thinking Leia may not even be his sister. This should be cool, finding out what happens to them. Looking forward to your next chapters, juliskywalker!
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Post by juliskywalker on Dec 26, 2006 14:37:18 GMT -5
in the new chapter it's that doubt that maybe luke and leia are nor sibilings, and i don't know if i should aso modify the story of the prequels or make it the same
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Post by Steller's Jay on Dec 26, 2006 15:56:50 GMT -5
It's your story and your feelings behind it. "Stretch out with your feelings," juliskywalker. Or, whatever. ;D
In other words, write what feels right to you!
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 26, 2006 16:31:21 GMT -5
in the new chapter it's that doubt that maybe luke and leia are nor sibilings, and i don't know if i should aso modify the story of the prequels or make it the same Like Stellar's Jay said - it's your story. Do what YOU want to do. Many of us (maybe all of us) have changed what happened in Star Wars; don't worry if you don't do exactly what George Lucas wrote if you don't want to. You're doing a really good job so far, too. I don't imagine that Luke and Leia would agree on everything - especially anything to do with Vader/Anakin. Please keep writing.
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Post by Annie on Dec 26, 2006 19:26:00 GMT -5
Yeah, most of us have changed things from the movies, and it's fun, and always interesting to see what everyone comes up with. The only thing I would say is, since you made the event in your story after the movies, maybe you need to go back and put in something of a backstory, maybe in flashbacks, that explains why they don't know who their Dad is. Since the movies made quite a big deal out of Luke being Vader's son, it could get confusing to some readers. But if you explain what happened and it was different from the movies, you have another alternate universe story where things are changed like most of us write and that would explain it. It is your story, and I want to see what you have in mind!
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Post by Astrid on Dec 27, 2006 11:48:55 GMT -5
This is a different type of story, and you have my interest! Write more soon!
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Post by arie on Dec 29, 2006 23:56:59 GMT -5
Hey, wow. This is pretty cool and interesting. I've never read anything like it before. Please keep writing! ;D
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