Across the Stars- An Anthology of Anakin and Padme

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This is my anthology of Anakin and Padme rhyming poetry. I hope you enjoy it and you can leave comments in this thread.

Here's my first two that I'll start us off with:

The first is titled "Your Angel" and it is in Padme's POV during AOTC. Enjoy!

Your Angel

Are you an angel?

Decidedly not.

But I met your steady gaze,

My attention caught.

In a twist of irony,

I cannot have known

That right then, a piece

Of my fate had been sewn.

I’m lost in your eyes,

Haunted by your touch,

And surprised that your presence,

Affects me so much.

My love is for the people,

As a Senator, a former Queen,

But as a girl, as Padmé,

I can’t have foreseen.

I’m falling in love

Selfishly letting it in

Transfixed by your aura

And that lopsided grin

Yet I’m forced to forget

And keep these thoughts hidden

For I know that such love

Is darkly forbidden

But those eyes reel me in

On the Nabooan lake shores

Am I an angel, you ask.

Maybe I’m yours.

Next we have: "Your Smile", which is also Padme's POV and takes place during the Clone Wars, upon one of AP's reunions.

Your Smile

The sight of you,

Standing in the doorway,

Erases my qualms and

I feel myself sway.

For a moment I just

Gaze in your eyes

And my relief and joy

Causes me to cry.

In your absence

My desperation grew,

My face streaked with tears,

Calling out to you.

You speak my name,

The sound makes me shudder

And I run into your arms

Melting like butter.

Your hand brushes my tears

Being alone had been tough,

So you try to console me...

But your smile’s enough.

What do you think?

[sexystarwarslover]

beautiful just beautiful, the second was so beauitful, love it