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Post by Annie on Aug 12, 2007 10:48:50 GMT -5
Hey I like what you're doing here, it's going to be a lot of fun. Great idea and good work with the characters and story!
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Post by christyc21 on Aug 12, 2007 12:16:37 GMT -5
interesting...I like it..I can't wait to read more of it
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Post by Astrid on Aug 14, 2007 11:43:43 GMT -5
Anakin a professor, his 'magic' is powerful indeed! Will he use a wand or a lightsaber?
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Post by Astrid on Sept 17, 2007 10:12:45 GMT -5
Very creative, the two sets of characters work well together. You merged it beautifully. I like the portrait entrance thing. I can totally see Draco turning to the 'dark side', the deatheaters are very like the Sith. Will be interesting to see what all comes of this.
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Post by Annie on Sept 23, 2007 16:48:59 GMT -5
If anyone can handle Draco it's Luke! What are you going to do with Voldy in this? I'll keep reading. Good ideas and great job!
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Post by Astrid on Sept 27, 2007 9:30:16 GMT -5
You tied the nightmares into it, good idea! This is getting scarier!
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Post by Annie on Oct 20, 2007 19:48:59 GMT -5
What does he mean he 'needs' the kids? I was afraid of this, their power is so great now Voldy will try to get them! It's good the whole family is there, I hope there's something they can do. What will happen at Christmas, will they go home or not?
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Oct 21, 2007 4:14:06 GMT -5
you don't want to know, it's not going to be a pretty sight
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Post by Annie on Nov 1, 2007 16:46:21 GMT -5
Oh no if they're both having the same dreams it has to be a terrible sign, and being Anakin's kids you know it's for real! I am worried for them!
BTW nice love scene of A and P!
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Post by Astrid on Nov 29, 2007 10:42:12 GMT -5
Nice Christmas scene! Love it!
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Post by Annie on Dec 8, 2007 23:34:13 GMT -5
You describe the Christmas scenes very beautifully. But it's not so festive a time, danger is still around. I'm very worried about all the things that are happening. I hope the kids do get Dumbledore to help. Can they contact any of the other Jedi?
I like the forest scene. Your ideas are always great!
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Post by Annie on Jan 1, 2008 19:24:39 GMT -5
I really liked that! The Shrieking Shack, and the candy, I could just see them there, like a happy magical family. Nice Christmas Eve! Then what happened?
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Jan 2, 2008 3:53:57 GMT -5
the christmas day part should be up there, i think it's page 2 now, but not saying anything but you'll be surprsied
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