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Post by arie on Mar 31, 2007 10:01:50 GMT -5
 I'd love it if you could drop me a line or two. 
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Post by Annie on Mar 31, 2007 18:23:07 GMT -5
This is very good! Your descriptions and dialogue are very well written. I like how you tell it! I thought he was going to tell when Obi-Wan started talking about women, but he did later- GOOD! Now that Obi-Wan knows, this has to change things. As long as he doesn't tell on him! The talk between them was just what you'd expect from Obi-Wan. Good story and characterizations! What else have you got planned?
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Mar 31, 2007 20:25:22 GMT -5
this was such a interesting story-so now Obi Wan knows interesting, keep writing more this is good
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Post by Astrid on Apr 3, 2007 9:28:42 GMT -5
I'm so glad he told Obi-Wan and he understands. the council needs to understand that Padme is a part of his destiny and it all fits together. I always believed that the hiding and the fear of losing her was much worse for him than an open attachement would have been. Anxious to see where you take this!
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Post by Astrid on May 8, 2007 14:06:37 GMT -5
They're coming home! Will it be like ROTS or are you gonna change it?
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Post by arie on May 8, 2007 14:36:50 GMT -5
You'll see! Thanks for commenting!!!
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Post by Astrid on May 16, 2007 9:30:09 GMT -5
He made Master! I hope this will change his attitude and he won't turn!
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Post by Annie on May 28, 2007 9:56:00 GMT -5
She's pregnant and he's on the council, I like how you're mixing some same and some changed things in this and I wonder how they'll turn out. I can tell you for sure I like your version better than ROTS, in both what's happening, and the way you write the characters! Good job!
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Post by padme on Aug 2, 2007 14:45:43 GMT -5
I really like this story. He's on the council. but how will they respond when they find out he's married and going to be a father. how long can they keep it a secret!
Ok - palps - that's it - don't bother them this time!!!!!!!
he still had the nightmare. oh no! i think palps is sending it!
More, please!!!!!
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Post by sonotyourmom on Sept 14, 2007 21:24:15 GMT -5
this is the best story ever
i cant wait until you post more but until then i will wait ;D
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