Comments for Rebirth of the Jedi

[PadmeSkywalker]

please post your thoughts and/or suggestions here... thanks

[Annie]

What a wonderful moment when Anakin realizes his friend is alive, not a ghost, but really back! You capture all their emotions and feelings. I really like what you've done with this, the characters, story, the whole thing, a very different direction, and a good one!

[Astrid]

MOST impressive plot turns you have going on here! You must have thought very deeply to come up with this, the other prophecy, another history, and its explainations. Good job well done!!

Ack, Palps is back and has revealed himself to Anakin. I am so worried Anakin may feel he has to sacrifice himself to save Padme and the babies, but then who will fight the perfect evil? This is a very scary but thrilling turn of events!

[Annie]

Yes it is a complicated, intricate story! I was hanging on every word and I could just imagine them all saying those things just the way you told it! Your dialogue and descriptions are excellent. This is more complicated than Lucas, and all so original of your own invention. You have outdone yourself. Did I ever tell you this is a good story?

[crystalcat]

Oh, you caught up to where I had read before and posted something new - sorry I missed it until now!

So Sidious showed himself at last - but the Jedi foiled his plan to hold Padme to control Anakin. Unfortunately, from Anakin's reaction, he hasn't yet learned to regard the things Sidious says as of questionable truthfulness. I'm kind of worried about what he will try next. At least this time, Anakin won't be handicapped by keeping everything secret from the Jedi.

[crystalcat]

I agree with Anakin - I don't think it's right for the Force to bring back the dead Jedi for a "job" and then put them away again (like folding up clothes?). Not that you couldn't describe it so it makes sense at the time when it happens. Right now, though, I'm holding out hope that Anakin will figure out a way to stop that from happening...

Please don't go so long before the next post!

[Annie]

Oh good, an update!

The scenes of Anakin with the Jedi, and Anakin with his family, are both so good and I enjoy imagining it all! I like how you're using the droids, too, good way to keep them around, and lol @ the pancakes! I can just see Threepio getting all jittery like he does with those kids around!And of course, Anakin and Padme's love for the kids, and for each other, loving every minute of it and the way you tell it!

It's good the Jedi are being so good with him, and understanding how he has two priorities now. Nice to see them all getting along. I sure hope there is a way they can stay forever!

[Annie]

I missed the latest update, sorry! Aww, how cute, the kids are adorable and I'm so glad they get to meet with Obi-Wan. What a nice scene!

Now Anakin feels cold, I hope it's not a bad omen of things to come!

[Astrid]

Oh good she's going to have another baby and he won't miss out on its birth this time!

If he lives...I am worried about him now! He senses Obi-Wan is in danger and all the other jedi are gone, could this be the big Palpatine battle?

[crystalcat]

Well, after I asked you to hurry up and post, you did it so fast last month that I missed it entirely! I could try to blame it on my electric going out for days AGAIN, but that doesn't excuse not seeing it when the power came back on. Anyhoo, I got two chapters to read this time.

I sure hope Obi-Wan doesn't have to go through death again! How cruel if he does - even worse than just being absorbed back into the Force! Maybe Anakin can help somehow? I'm more curious than ever to see what they are all fighting, and if and when Anakin will join them. And so now Padme is pregnant again just when Anakin has to go re-destroy Palpatine? Oh, no - I hope he has better sense this time, and really will not miss out on the birth and first year - or any more than that.

I'm really wondering where you are taking this story - sometimes I can guess, but not here. ;D

[Annie]

Yay an update!!

Poor Anakin, such a nice guy struggling with worrying about all those he cares for. He loves his family and wants to be with them, but he's torn because of his concern for his brothers! Then that awful nightmare, not again! Now about his Jedi friends! And he's not even sure if it's real, or is it Palps? I'm sure he's going to suffer a lot until he finds out what it means and what he can do! Please update as soon as you can!

[Annie]

I love seeing him explain how he sees through everything Palps tried to do! Padme is so sweet and understanding knowing how desperate his love was for her. Now he's got to figure out what to do to help the others, without letting it drive him to the dark side, without playing into Palps' hands! I'm so glad he's got her there to help guide him and I know he'll do the right thing. But it's going to be stressful to figure out what that is!

[sexystarwarslover]

oh i feel so bad for Anakin, he loves Padme and his children and now it's all going down hill which i hope it doesn't this is such a beautiful story please continue

[Astrid]

You don't know how happily surprised I was to see you writing again! I love this story! You have again beautifully portrayed Anakin and Padme and their love for each other and their family that I enjoy so much. It's so bad he doesn't even know what's real or not because of that monster messing with his dreams. I am pulling for him, that his love and goodness will be able to get him through what's coming, because it looks like it's going to be tough and he'll need all his strength through the force, his body, and his mind. With Padme beside him I know he can do it.

[crystalcat]

At least he knows now not to trust Palpatine or even to trust the content of his dreams - sooo nice to see him considering that Palpatine might have interfered in his dreams the last time and could be now. I think he'll be okay, just ... tired.

Nice to finally see another post from you again, too!