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Post by queennaberrie on Feb 20, 2007 23:00:55 GMT -5
Hi! I am going to be copying and pasting my stories directly from fanfiction.net, starting with "Early Redemption", which is currently still in production. Therefore, if I can't post an update on fanfiction.net for some reason, as they seem to have a lot of technical difficulties, I will post updates here as well. If you have any comments or questions, please feel free to post them in this thread and I will try to answer them the best I can. May the Force be with you, QueenNaberrie aka QN  P.S. I decided to take pity on those people who don't have fast Internet service and I'm splitting my story up. That way the page won't take so long to load. "Early Redemption is a very LONG story and it's only going to get longer. |
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Feb 21, 2007 1:36:13 GMT -5
wow great story! I love that anakin and padme have met their children! This reminds me of that movie with Dennis Quaid and how he talks to his son in the future...... wonderful writing, can't wait for more!
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Post by queennaberrie on Feb 21, 2007 22:31:10 GMT -5
Thank you, PadmeSkywalker. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I have 81 chapters written for "Early Redemption" and I'm going to be copying and pasting the rest over soon. I usually update once a week, usually on the weekends. That is unless I get some inspiration to update twice in a week, which happens occassionally. And I never even thought of that. "Frequency" is the movie I think you are referring to... where they talk over a HAM (sp?) radio. I have that movie on DVD and love it! Yeah, I can sort of see that. Only in this story, Luke and Leia are actually in the past talking to Anakin. More coming now that Annie has me set up with sub-boards for each story. Thanks, Annie! QN |
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Post by Astrid on Feb 22, 2007 10:36:31 GMT -5
Welcome to the board! You have a cool idea here! I've only read the first chapter so far but I like the Back to the Future aspect a lot! Good for Leia blurting it out that she knew who the Sith Lord was. I only hope their relationship with their father works and helps. I'll be reading more soon, I know it's going to be great but I'm not skipping ahead to ruin my surprise.
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Post by queennaberrie on Feb 23, 2007 18:48:48 GMT -5
Hi Astraltraveler, I'm glad you're liking this so far. "Back to the Future" in another favorite movie of mine. But, of course, I really wasn't thinking about that movie either when I started writing it. I guess I'm a big time travel fanatic.  Hope you enjoy the rest of the story. I hope to post the rest of the chapters I have written here soon. May the Force be with you, QN |
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Post by Astrid on Feb 26, 2007 10:25:51 GMT -5
Cool! Is it going to be a crossover, but with no BTTF characters? This sounds like so much fun. Please post again soon! And may the force be with you, too.
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Post by queennaberrie on Mar 6, 2007 21:24:21 GMT -5
Cool! Is it going to be a crossover, but with no BTTF characters? This sounds like so much fun. Please post again soon! And may the force be with you, too. Well, it's not really a crossover of BTTF. But I guess in a way, with Luke and Leia going back in time to save their father, it could be in a sense. |
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Post by queennaberrie on Mar 6, 2007 21:24:52 GMT -5
Hi Everyone! Just added 10 more chapters for your reading enjoyment. QN |
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Post by Annie on Mar 7, 2007 23:14:04 GMT -5
Chapter 10
I really, really like the lines you give everyone, and how you are doing this!
Oh, no, after all that, he still has his doubts and might still turn? Eek! I will read more soon!
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Post by Astrid on Mar 9, 2007 11:32:48 GMT -5
Cool! Is it going to be a crossover, but with no BTTF characters? This sounds like so much fun. Please post again soon! And may the force be with you, too. Well, it's not really a crossover of BTTF. But I guess in a way, with Luke and Leia going back in time to save their father, it could be in a sense. That's okay! I like the way you're doing it better! |
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Post by Saphira on Mar 16, 2007 1:50:14 GMT -5
Hi Queennaberrie!! I just started your story tonight, and I finished reading Chapter Ten of your story, and will continue reading more tomorrow. I am LOVING your story! Luke and Leia have a chance to go back in time, to save the Jedi from their terrible fate, and to save their father from turning to the dark side. They've been given such a chance, but will they succeed? Will they change the course of the past? Or is their nothing they can do? As of now, things are looking good. Luke and Leia have already deeply helped Anakin see the truth of Palpatine, and Anakin has revealed his secret to Obi-Wan, and gained his children's and former mentor's advice and help. He didn't have any help the last time. Now he does, to help him to get past this evil. But I'm still worried. By the looks of things, Anakin still is worrying about his dream. What if he believes he's got no choice but to join the dark side in order to safe her? What if Anakin starts to believe there is no choice but to follow Palpatine? I hope his children and Obi-Wan and Padme can help him! I'm also glad Luke and Leia where able to meet Anakin before he turned, to see what their father was before he became Darth Vader. I'm so glad they met Padme to. I really hope they can change the past, so Anakin and Padme can be together and with their children and be a family, like they always should have been. I'm really excited this story is really long, I can't wait to see what happens. I have a feeling they'll be some shocking things happening in the following chapters! Will Anakin overcome the darkness? I can't wait to find out! Excellent, Wonderful Work! Keep it up! |
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Post by crystalcat on Mar 17, 2007 20:48:36 GMT -5
I just did a marathon read of the whole thing so far posted just to find out that ... NOOOO! It's not finished yet!
I certainly hope you intend to keep going with this - it's wonderful! Love the mix of time- and dimension-jumping so that there's an Anakin who never turned and ALSO a Darth Vader who did in the same exact story! I'm just worried now that you're going to go ahead and destroy Alderaan anyway - but even if you do, I can't wait to see what happens next and how you'll tie everything together at the end.
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Post by padme on Mar 22, 2007 16:41:14 GMT -5
I've just read through chapter 4. I just had to stop and send you a note. This is a great story!!!! I love anakins reponse to hearing about Palp and Leia's response: 'while I go dark side' and smacks him across the side of his head!!! too funny!
I can't wait to see what elese happens. I hope Ani is strong enough to not let palps influence him. and when will he tell obi-wan the truth? hummmmmmmmm.\
off I go to chapter 5!
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Post by padme on Mar 29, 2007 14:06:18 GMT -5
OOOo wow! i just finished through chapter 45! OOOO this is getting good! I haven't been able to take my eyes off of it yet! but where is the rest? You said what - 80+ chapters so far? this is coming to be a great story! wow - 4 kids. they are like bunnies aren't they/ he, he, he. I love the twists - that it has the same as the orignal movies but slightly different. With ani being good and all.
Now this Darth Vader just cracks me up!!!! How he's sooooooo 'taken' with the naberrie women. I bet Leia is just driving him nuts!!!! Talk about pouring salt in an old wound and it never healing! OUCH!
sooooo will we see Han Solo next? hummmmmmmm. can't wait for more!!!!!
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Post by sexystarwarslover on May 10, 2007 19:32:13 GMT -5
Wow, this was a great story! i found it last night and i was completly hooked, i just finished chapter 45 to find that there was no more! please write some more i am completely hooked! This is a great idea story and so funny and loving, keep up the good work!
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