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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 2, 2007 5:07:43 GMT -5
This is where you can comment on my story-please be nice this is my first story
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Post by samantha on Apr 2, 2007 6:07:03 GMT -5
This is a very, very smooth beginning, and I found very clever of you to put both couples mirroring to each other, like we use to see in the movies.
Very nice.
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by christyc21 on Apr 2, 2007 13:17:03 GMT -5
interesting..very promising..I love it...nice beginning..I agree with sam..they both have lovers that seem somewhat similar to the other...keep up with the great work
Christy
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 3, 2007 4:29:29 GMT -5
thanks for the lovely comments-i 'm glad you guys enjoyed it i am going to be wrting more thanks for the support
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Post by Astrid on Apr 3, 2007 9:10:03 GMT -5
I like your idea and the way you're writing it. I can just picture them together, you're a good writer. Please continue!
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Post by arie on Apr 3, 2007 20:42:28 GMT -5
Very very interesting! I can't wait until Hayden and Natalie meet! Please write more soon.  |
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 4, 2007 4:40:02 GMT -5
a new chapter is up for a chance romance-btw, the parts where hayden and natalie are together are memories-it was supposed to be in itlalics those parts but it didn't come up
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Post by samantha on Apr 4, 2007 5:14:09 GMT -5
I just finished up reading! WOW!
I found those memories very HOT, and painful bruises at the same time. You've certainly found the balance between both, which isn't always an easy task.
Also, you've perfectly rendered Hayden's sensitive nature underlining his seductive's one, for that was what I was apprehending a bit to see, and you've done very well.
And I just got the feeling that if both couples are meeting into Rome, it's going to be rock n'roll, somehow!
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by arie on Apr 4, 2007 7:36:10 GMT -5
Great new chapter. You keep me anticipating more!  |
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 5, 2007 4:47:32 GMT -5
wow, thanks guys i did not know that this was going to be so well received, thanks for supporting i get to work and have another part up tomorrow night
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Post by Annie on Apr 5, 2007 12:46:40 GMT -5
I liked your telling of the Cannes festival in memories! Bald head, LOL! I'm glad she has hair again! But after all those memories, here comes Jude again..oh dear what will her heart tell her to do? And Hayden still has Rachael in the picture. Sigh, write some more!
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 6, 2007 5:13:28 GMT -5
don't worry i just posted a new chapter ,getting close now, lol,i know it hopefully could change hehehehe
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Post by samantha on Apr 6, 2007 8:49:36 GMT -5
That was smooth, very smoothly, cleverly written, Dearest! You got me hooked! Can't wait to see what's coming up next! Kisses, Sam. |
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Apr 6, 2007 21:22:40 GMT -5
wow thanks for that, i 'm glad i can make it interesting, i will be putting uo more soon!
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Post by samantha on Apr 9, 2007 5:28:34 GMT -5
That meeting into town was definitively very realistic, Dear. Exactly what's happening when you've not seen someone for a while. An awful while. It feels like it's been forever, for that's precisely what I got from your chapter 4.
It's getting even more interesting, for you're showing a reality I rarely saw elsewhere (save into Christy's story before reading yours), and I'm grateful towards you both for that. it's a neat Easter treat you nestled here. Thank you.
Kisses,
Sam.
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