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[Annie]

about "From the Ashes."

[Saphira]

I've already made comments on your story to chapter 16 on another site, and I shall continue to make comments on your story from where I last was.

Chapter 17

Gerapaline is cruel, evil, sick and twisted! I really hope Padme will have her revenge on him soon! I hate him so much! Oh god, I'm so worried for Padme and the babies! Gerapaline means what he says, and he will kill her children if she does not obey his orders. But what does Gerapaline want Padme to do? I am so worried..whatever Gerapaline wants Padme to do for him, it's not going to be good..and Padme knows if she refuses to do his bidding, he'll kill the children. Gerapaline is evil, he killed his own father! And is forcing his own mother to work for him, he's so evil! And now she is taking care of Padme's babies. I hope she won't hurt them! And what he did to those people..
I also like how we see Padme facing a similar situation as Anakin and the Tusken Raider camp. She was killing all of them-even the ones who did nothing. Like Anakin and the Tusken Raiders. She's starting to understand how Anakin felt.

Anakin is going to help her, he's going to find her and save her and the children. One thing I know, no one hurts Anakin's wife, or his children, and gets away with it! Anakin is also taking a commanding position, I'm so happy Anakin doesn't want to go and hide anymore, he's coming back to his old self. I agree with Obi-Wan, perhaps what happened is what he needs to bring himself back to his old self. But not at the cost of anyone's lives! I hope he can find Padme and the babies in time!

It also seems that Bail was able to tell the Anakin and Padme where in love. I'm glad Bail holds nothing against them for it, and understands. He's really nice with them to, I'm so glad Bail is so friendly! And he thanked them for stopping the evil cruel Palpatine, and he also mentioned to Anakin that he had fulfilled an anicent prophecy! But as for rescuing Padme, there not sure where Gerapaline may have taken her. Can Anakin sense his wife and his children's presence in the force? I really hope Anakin can find them! I am so worried! Who knows what cruel twisted things Gerapaline is going to force Padme to do! He's so cruel, to torture her with the knowledge that if she does not obey, he'll kill her children, to torture her with the fact that she won't be able to see them again unless she does as he wishes, torturing her by letting her close to her babies but not allowed to touch or hold them. One thing I do know, no one messess with the vengeance of a mother! And a father to, when Anakin see's what Gerpaline is doing to his babies! And to Padme! He'll regret ever being born!

Well done! A wonderful chapter!

[Steller's Jay]

I loved this story on the other site. I'll read it again soon!

[PadmeSkywalker]

I just read the entire story, how I loved it! It was so wonderful how Padme had to go through everything Anakin had....... even the blindness...... they truly were meant for each other...... well done!

[padme52]

Annie,
I just read this story in one sitting I really loved it . They went thru so much but there was never any doubt of their love . Both for each other and the twins.

This story had it all, angst, action, danger, drama, humor and romance. Once I started reading I could not stop.
I am so glad it all worked out for them in the end. The love between them can never die. They are true soul mates.

This is a very unique redemption story you did a wonderful job.

[DarthAnakin]

well done! finished reading it and i must say its really good! to think that bail's wife was so mean to anakin!! dude! not kool! lol! any very good!

[sexystarwarslover]

wow, that was awesome! i just read the story again, for like the 10th time and i was able to see more cearly the love and pain they went trhough to be together