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Post by therealthing on Aug 22, 2006 7:26:51 GMT -5
Please let me know what you think! thanks  |
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Aug 22, 2006 10:26:36 GMT -5
I love this story from the point of view of vader...... oh his memories haunt him..... but he realizes that his son survived! The plot thickens!
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Post by Astrid on Aug 23, 2006 9:50:46 GMT -5
I love how you're telling this from his POV! I always wanted to think Anakin was still in there somewhere, and your Vader seems so much more real than the one in the movies. I like that! I like seeing his thoughts on the things that happened, I can totally imagine him thinking that! Great work!
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Aug 28, 2006 14:09:13 GMT -5
Oh I love how Vader looks at his son, and sees his mother..... well done...... the emotions that Vader is trying to surpress is wonderful!..... I really am enjoying this the second time!
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Aug 28, 2006 21:57:41 GMT -5
oh he dreamt of his mother...... there is still good in him! well done
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Post by Astrid on Sept 7, 2006 10:12:37 GMT -5
It is so sad that Anakin has been put in prison and is being treated so badly. He has suffered too much already. Now the husband of Pooja is there, this is cool! Please Luke help him!
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Post by crystalcat on Sept 10, 2006 17:20:43 GMT -5
I notice you haven't been posting this one at the same rate you are "Remade." I think you're not getting as many comments because most of us have read it already. But --- I am enjoying re-reading it, so wanted to encourage you to not give up posting it.
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Post by Astrid on Sept 13, 2006 9:42:30 GMT -5
Yes please do keep on posting it! I want to read it as it comes!
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Post by Astrid on Sept 13, 2006 10:09:02 GMT -5
I am feeling so sorry for Anakin right now! I do hope he will be found not guilty! This is good gripping drama!
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Post by christyc21 on Sept 17, 2006 21:25:59 GMT -5
wow...I have only gotten a chance to read this first page..and it just..the emotions..the words..everything..just..blows me away...I can see everything as you have written it..wow..I cannot wait until I read the second page..unfortunately for me it will have to be After school tomorrow..
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Post by christyc21 on Sept 19, 2006 21:32:59 GMT -5
again..wow...this story is so moving and touching...I love it...the way you write with such feeling and character...I can just see and feel the emotions..and what they are going through...I can only hope..for Anakin's sake that Padme will see past what Vader has done and see the man she once loved because...I truely don't think he can last without her..yes he would get to see his kids..but..still...she is His Life...his soulmate...keep it up, i can't wait to read more..
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Post by christyc21 on Sept 25, 2006 22:44:34 GMT -5
Wow, so its back into the suit for anakin once again...hmm..this is very interesting...i can't wait to see where this is going..
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Post by Astrid on Oct 10, 2006 14:23:47 GMT -5
Yes! Anakin and Padme love, deep and true! I am so happy at how things are going!
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Post by Astrid on Oct 14, 2006 9:55:15 GMT -5
Wow, he took her along and he admitted openly she's his wife! I am concerned this may hurt their plan!
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Post by Astrid on Oct 24, 2006 10:47:53 GMT -5
How hard it must be to have to keep playing Vader when he doesn't feel it anymore but good for him!
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