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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Aug 19, 2006 20:03:38 GMT -5
please let me know what you think...... if I'm confusing you or not completeing a certain thought so to speak.... I always like constructive criticism.... but he has to be nice!
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Post by therealthing on Aug 20, 2006 22:05:53 GMT -5
An excellent start!! I'm so glad to see that Padme survived and still loves her Ani, despite everything. I'm sure she would have forgiven him too. I look forward to reading more!
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Post by Astrid on Aug 23, 2006 10:13:42 GMT -5
I like it! I was worried when I saw he was injured and became Vader anyway but this makes a difference. I always wondered what he'd have done if he had found out she was alive, while the babies were still small. He can't still be evil Vader if his family is alive and loves him, this has got to make a difference. Padme still cares! It's not too late!
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Post by padme52 on Aug 25, 2006 0:00:55 GMT -5
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Post by padme52 on Aug 29, 2006 13:23:18 GMT -5
Thanks for the update.
You have done a nice job in capturing the true and deep love they have for each other , which was strong enough to transcended into the darkness.
I loved the scene when he sensed her and was happy.
Please post your next installment soon.
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Post by padme52 on Sept 4, 2006 8:55:24 GMT -5
Anakin has started his rehabilitation with Padme is at his side . Her love is the balance to the Palpatines darkness. Padme offers Anakin a path out of the darkness thru the light of her love.  I really like this story. |
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Post by Astrid on Sept 7, 2006 10:36:59 GMT -5
I hope they can get the twins back! they're dreaming of their Daddy, how sweet.
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Post by padme52 on Sept 12, 2006 19:05:36 GMT -5
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Post by arie on Sept 21, 2006 21:34:00 GMT -5
Wow, I love it.
It's amazing! That part with Anakin and Obi-Wan nearly made me cry...
Very very good.
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Post by Astrid on Oct 6, 2006 16:43:31 GMT -5
Lots to worry about here, I hope everything works out fine for them. I never imagined what else might happen now. You have excellent plans.
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Post by queennaberrie on Feb 23, 2007 23:44:17 GMT -5
WOW! What a wonderful story! It makes me want to cry with joy. :,) Although, I was saddened that Obi-Wan didn't live as well. True he is a Force spirit, but I was hoping he would continue to be a friend and brother to Anakin. QN |
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Post by ladykenobi on Mar 18, 2007 11:10:06 GMT -5
I really liked this story, as the title alone was enough to interest me and when I realized she was going to assist in Anakins redemption I was hooked.
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Post by Jessica "Angel" Skywalker on Sept 16, 2007 22:55:43 GMT -5
[glow=aqua,2,300]Great story. I hope you have a FFNet account. But its a bit sad.  [/glow]
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