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Post by crystalcat on Mar 27, 2007 20:04:18 GMT -5
Oh, no. Their logic was ridiculous; but of course they could never just come out and SAY they wanted to arrest him for revenge or because they'd just always dreamed of doing it (and good thing Obi-Wan stopped Leia from revealing her relationship to Vader; they'd probably have arrested her too; hopefully they won't persecute Luke now they know Vader is Anakin Skywalker). Only now they've pushed him into killing his captors and they'll probably use that to "prove" he hasn't changed at all. I'm hoping there's a security video or something. At least I think Obi-Wan knows what happened, but he's too late to stop Vader from over-defending himself. Please post the next part; I want to see how you resolve this!
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Post by Annie on Mar 28, 2007 18:40:22 GMT -5
So much info on everybody, this is really running along at a good pace! So Vader CAN possibly be healed, or he at least needs to change his 'look' quickly now that he's escaped and a wanted man! Dodonna is suspicious of the twins, that's not good. Palps now knows he's been betrayed, oh no. But Padme could still be out there, in a coma? She's in the same hospital he's at, and will he be healed there? Nice additions, looking forward to more!
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Post by crystalcat on Mar 28, 2007 20:08:45 GMT -5
So Dodonna IS suspicious of Luke's name. At least he was honest with himself about what happened in Vader's cell; let's hope he can contain his hatred enough to not chase Luke & Leia away from the rebellion.
I'm a bit worried about the method Vader and Obi-Wan are using to find out about Padme - Palpatine is sure to look along the same lines, especially when he clues into who Leia really is (or if he EVER hears about Luke). He'll know what happened to turn Vader against him then for sure, and of course, going after Padme will be the first way he will torture his errant apprentice. I can see the overall plot emerging (or not; maybe you will completely blindside me - if so, go ahead; I'm loving it either way).
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Post by Astrid on Mar 29, 2007 14:06:21 GMT -5
He has to ditch the suit now being hunted by both sides. I sure hope Padme is alive and not to damaged, or even if she is, can they fix her? Or maybe love can fix them both I hope!
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Post by Annie on Mar 29, 2007 19:36:16 GMT -5
Padme has amnesia, but she's not 'damaged', very good plot! You said once you couldn't imagine her abandoning even one of her babies if she were alive and normal, and I agree! So this is another way for her to be alive but explain where she's been and why! Bravo!
Looks like Han is falling for Leia anyway though the story changed, it was destiny! And I do like how it's Luke who's having the harder time coming around to Vader. LOL@ Han thinking Vader only wore the suit to scare people. I hope he can be healed, and find Padme and make her remember, but not in that suit! Good for them flying back! Post another chapter please!
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Post by crystalcat on Mar 30, 2007 18:55:48 GMT -5
Oh, good, Luke & Leia have a lead and Vader can be healed. Of course he has no intention of sticking around to recuperate, but in reality that will probably save his life. I think once Palpatine learns the kids survived, he'll be all over Polis Massa like maggots on a corpse (couldn't resist that comparison). He'll probably find out Vader isn't in the suit anymore, but he'll be a lot harder to find when he can blend in with the population.
I'm glad you're posting this fairly quickly; please keep it up!
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Post by Annie on Mar 30, 2007 20:59:43 GMT -5
Was Leia's dream of Padme? I hope it means something! And good, Vader is going to be healed, and soon! Sounds like 'extreme makeover' how they have to do it all at once and it's riskier. It IS an extreme makeover and I hope a hot one!Maybe once he's healed, he'll stop denying he's Anakin.
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Post by Annie on Mar 31, 2007 18:32:48 GMT -5
Oh! NOW I see what Leia's dream meant! (SPOILER ALERT) VADER SAW HER!!! I'm so happy he is able to be healed, especially after being left damaged all those years. It's lucky he wasn't ruined, or killed by that sadistic Palps' evil plans to keep him down! Can't wait to see how it works! You brought up something else I'd never thought of- how hard it must have been on Kenobi living all those years in that old cave with all that guilt and hardship and the painful memories. Good job, again!
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Post by crystalcat on Apr 1, 2007 7:55:42 GMT -5
Yes, I wondered when Vader would have the dream! With the waterfall in the distance, does that mean she is on Naboo? Now you have me wondering if she will even recognize him when he appears, if she supposedly blocked out her memory. That should prove interesting, if so. At least he is finally free of the suit.
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Post by Annie on Apr 1, 2007 15:52:41 GMT -5
I only have one complaint- in every one of your healing stories, he always starts out bald and stubble headed, and it's hard for me to imagine him hot. Hair takes several months to grow so in some cases it seems like he'd be a skinhead for most of the story. Since they can regrow and regenerate entire organs and lots of skin and even limbs in only a week, is it too much to ask that hair can be grown out a few inches? Pleeez?
I do bet Obi-Wan wishes he could get an extreme makeover, lol! Now that Anakin is out of the suit he won't have a problem with being hunted as Vader, but the doctors know who he really is and I hope no one tells!
Nice scene of Vader waking up and seeing his kids, and they seeing him. The kids matched visions, and matching with Vader/Anakin makes it a sure thing it means something! Now to find this rose garden...pleez!
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Post by Annie on Apr 1, 2007 22:33:13 GMT -5
Oh how I enjoyed having the twins ride Obi-Wan down for what he did to Anakin! It was terrible, and there's no way to make it not bad no matter how he uses his 'certain point of view' to twist thigns. He mutilated Anakin and left him to die suffering in agony. Even in wars enemies put each other out of such misery. I'm so glad you took us through all that, Obi-Wan deserved it!
Yikes, Palps now suspects Leia! What does he mean by the thing most precious to Vader? Will he try to kill Leia, or does he know something about Padme? I'm worried!
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Post by Astrid on Apr 3, 2007 9:39:51 GMT -5
he's got toes again, that was cute! The japor snippet, how sad. Very emotional stuff and very good.
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Post by crystalcat on Apr 4, 2007 20:38:42 GMT -5
So both Luke AND Leia are going to be trained as Jedi now! Of course! I'm wondering, though, who will train Luke and who will train Leia? So far, I notice, Anakin has not suggested himself as a trainer instead of Obi-Wan. Interesting that Vader didn't know Yoda was still alive - does that mean Sidious doesn't know, or just that Sidious never told Vader he didn't kill him?
And now Sidious knows about both twins. And has a new (although inferior) apprentice (one that will "do" - I guess sort of like Dooku until Luke or Leia fills in? In his mind?). Hope you keep posting the story at the pace you have set!
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Post by Annie on Apr 5, 2007 11:05:38 GMT -5
I love how you're taking them through everything that happened, I always thought that would make a difference in how they felt. How sad it all is. There's no way you can judge quite the same after you know the truth.
Oh no, Palps has a new apprentice! Together they must stop him!
(I haven't read the latest one yet, get to it soon!)
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Post by crystalcat on Apr 5, 2007 20:48:25 GMT -5
Oh, poor Bail! I hope Leia comes to realize that she doesn't have to choose between fathers; she can have both! Still, I think it's a good thing she isn't going back to Alderaan - in fact, I have a slight suspicion about the message she got anyway - was it real, or intended to lure her home?
And I'm worried about Vader going to Naboo; I'm afraid Sidious will expect that move. At least Luke will be safely off with Yoda.
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