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Post by christyc21 on Dec 29, 2006 14:42:38 GMT -5
What a great chapter! Please keep writing! I'm really starting to get into the story... what, with Tyler there now. The suspense. ah thank you..yeah i might not update until monday though because I'm at my dad's this weekend and well...he has no internet..no computer..so..but I May get a update before i leave..it all depends on the time..but i'm glad you like it |
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 29, 2006 14:43:44 GMT -5
Poor poor Nat! They have to get that guy out of there or she won't be able to function. This does give her a chance to get closer to Hayden, her hero! Nice way you left them there, very romantic! yeah..i feel bad for doing this to her..but I wanted some supense..and yes a way for them to get closer and learn more about each other..i'm glad you liked it.. |
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Post by Annie on Dec 30, 2006 12:14:36 GMT -5
A panic attack, how awful! I knew somebody who had those, it's a bad thing. This isn't good for her at all. Hayden's love and protection will help. He can keep an eye on this character if George won't get rid of him.
What will happen next? You have me deeply concerned!
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Post by christyc21 on Jan 1, 2007 20:47:33 GMT -5
A panic attack, how awful! I knew somebody who had those, it's a bad thing. This isn't good for her at all. Hayden's love and protection will help. He can keep an eye on this character if George won't get rid of him. What will happen next? You have me deeply concerned! yeah..I've seen someone have those..it wasn't that great... its not good.. ah... i'm sorry to worry you..don't worry nothing bad will happen..that I can assure you.. |
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Post by samantha on Jan 2, 2007 10:21:14 GMT -5
Christy, Dearest, I've given a quick glance to what you've done, but I prefer to read it when I'll feel better. I got a very nasty cold, and I want my mind to be clear enough to leave you my comments then.
But as far as I've seen, it seems my insight got it right again. Your idea pleases me very much, that's why I'll wait to have fully recovered to enjoy it plainly.
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by christyc21 on Jan 2, 2007 13:30:59 GMT -5
Christy, Dearest, I've given a quick glance to what you've done, but I prefer to read it when I'll feel better. I got a very nasty cold, and I want my mind to be clear enough to leave you my comments then. But as far as I've seen, it seems my insight got it right again. Your idea pleases me very much, that's why I'll wait to have fully recovered to enjoy it plainly. Kisses, Sam. well I hope you can enjoy it once you are better.. which I hope you get better soon Sam |
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Post by samantha on Jan 5, 2007 11:46:36 GMT -5
My Goodness!
By reading Natalie's panicked reaction, I got much reminded of my own when I use to feel stalked myself not long ago. And I can only confirm, it doesn't feel nice at all. I had met on the net once a guy from Belgium who took me for granted, and who absolutely didn't want to give me space, even though the feelings weren't reciprocal at all. Which was the worse of of all, of course. He couldn't understand he wasn't my type, The Viking Type.
Tyler recalled me very much of him in his attitude to not bear that I looked elsewhere, even making friends with another man!
Per say, normally into my Viking modern Saga, Thorvald and Rosenwood will be confronted again to Rosenwood's very stalker already met briefly in chapter 7.
I smiled when I saw Hayden's reaction. It was very much done in pure Viking-like style. I could tell than the Viking in him sensed that something was going very wrong, therein his need to rely on his cunning skills (yes, for Vikings were famed for their sense of cunning, and Thorvald's standing example of that!), while chatting with Georges after the incident. I'm very glad because you got that part so well done, Christy! I'm glad I waited to get better to read you as soon as possible to see that!
All I can say is, keep it up, for I'll be looking forward to see how you'll make the Viking sleeping in Hayden shining through!
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by christyc21 on Jan 9, 2007 17:06:28 GMT -5
My Goodness! By reading Natalie's panicked reaction, I got much reminded of my own when I use to feel stalked myself not long ago. And I can only confirm, it doesn't feel nice at all. I had met on the net once a guy from Belgium who took me for granted, and who absolutely didn't want to give me space, even though the feelings weren't reciprocal at all. Which was the worse of of all, of course. He couldn't understand he wasn't my type, The Viking Type. Tyler recalled me very much of him in his attitude to not bear that I looked elsewhere, even making friends with another man! Per say, normally into my Viking modern Saga, Thorvald and Rosenwood will be confronted again to Rosenwood's very stalker already met briefly in chapter 7. I smiled when I saw Hayden's reaction. It was very much done in pure Viking-like style. I could tell than the Viking in him sensed that something was going very wrong, therein his need to rely on his cunning skills (yes, for Vikings were famed for their sense of cunning, and Thorvald's standing example of that!), while chatting with Georges after the incident. I'm very glad because you got that part so well done, Christy! I'm glad I waited to get better to read you as soon as possible to see that! All I can say is, keep it up, for I'll be looking forward to see how you'll make the Viking sleeping in Hayden shining through! Kisses, Sam. Ah I'm glad you are better now..and also glad you liked the latest chapter...yes, Hayden is very worried about her so i did put in that bit with George to show that...but it is also a bit of reflection on the Book AOTC...I belive R.A. Salvadore...wrote it...it had the discussion between Anakin and Ruwee, Padme's father..talking about her safety and how neither one of them would want any harm to come to her....I hope to write more soon but my Alg. III work is killing me...but I will find time..it just might take a bit longer... |
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Jan 28, 2007 4:29:36 GMT -5
Hey i was reading your story, and i want more, this is so good, poor thing had a panic attack, wold not have seen that coming, please, please,write some more!
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Post by juliskywalker on Feb 3, 2007 17:42:22 GMT -5
hey just passing by and wanted to tell you how much i love this story, hope u can writte more soon
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Post by Annie on Mar 11, 2007 21:35:17 GMT -5
Oooh, George let them move in, even though he knew how it would look. How nice- for them!(teehee)
Oh no! What happened? Is she okay? That Tyler!
You can't leave us like this! Please write more!
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Post by samantha on Mar 12, 2007 7:36:52 GMT -5
WOW! All I can say is WOW! You certainly improvized a daring move, here, Sweetie! And I agree with Annie on that one about George's opinion of how it'll look like to the others! That was a good one, it really was!
And about that Tyler, what creep! But on the other hand, I'm not very surprised either! You've to be a true moron to imagine to hurt your rival and not thinking you actually could hurt what you're aiming for! For after that, he weeps when he see what he's done! Unfortunately, such people exist! I don't want to, but Fate's here to remind you that when you're aiming to harm somebody else, you're punished within the minute!
I hope she's all right, for Hayden's anguish is very genuine, very real. Congratulations! Can't wait for more either!
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by christyc21 on Mar 12, 2007 17:05:55 GMT -5
Oooh, George let them move in, even though he knew how it would look. How nice- for them!(teehee) Oh no! What happened? Is she okay? That Tyler! You can't leave us like this! Please write more! Yes, how very nice for them..hehehehe.. Ah, well I actually managed to write some in my classes today..in between learning things...it might not be much..but i believe it will ease the cliffhanger pain for now..glad you like it |
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Post by christyc21 on Mar 12, 2007 17:19:41 GMT -5
WOW! All I can say is WOW! You certainly improvized a daring move, here, Sweetie! And I agree with Annie on that one about George's opinion of how it'll look like to the others! That was a good one, it really was! And about that Tyler, what creep! But on the other hand, I'm not very surprised either! You've to be a true moron to imagine to hurt your rival and not thinking you actually could hurt what you're aiming for! For after that, he weeps when he see what he's done! Unfortunately, such people exist! I don't want to, but Fate's here to remind you that when you're aiming to harm somebody else, you're punished within the minute! I hope she's all right, for Hayden's anguish is very genuine, very real. Congratulations! Can't wait for more either! Kisses, Sam. I'm glad you enjoyed it...I was hoping that wasn't too daring of a move though..because while Hayden does want to be close to her, he is very concerned with her well-being... yes Tyler is very bad....I know I wrote it but still..I can see that people out there like Tyler exist, they don't see they can are probably are hurting what they want most and its sad really that they even think that way... well you will find out soon..I am working on the update right now..and hope to get it up soon |
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Post by samantha on Mar 13, 2007 5:30:53 GMT -5
My Goodness! That was fast! Temper, temper...  Tyler sure got Hayden started for good, here. But it makes sense, when you got Viking ancestry running into your veins, somehow. For according to historical accounts, Vikings were famed to be rather very quick of temper, and you got that part very right, Christy  . However, when Tyler spat his venom at Hayden's face, which leads this one to assume the idea he's unable to protect his Lady as he's confessing to Natalie, hasn't been without reminding me of a similar dialogue held between Hayden Thorvald and Samantha Rosenwood into my modern Viking Saga, exactly after Hayden got into a row with Rosenwood's stalker as well in C.7  . And Rosenwood's been almost word for word saying the same thing to her beloved Viking ! Tyler's fright was deserved: Never think you can fool a Viking. He'll get back at you faster than you think ;D! Kisses, Sam. |
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