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Post by christyc21 on Sept 15, 2006 22:39:03 GMT -5
I'd love all kind of comments..no matter what kind they are..because they will help me to improve my writing so that I may do better next time...
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Post by Annie on Sept 16, 2006 14:16:37 GMT -5
This is very cute, I like how you set it up! Their meeting was so sweet, you can tell they have it for each other already! It was also nice how you brought in the other actors and their personalities. I'm looking forward to more!
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Post by christyc21 on Sept 16, 2006 14:34:38 GMT -5
This is very cute, I like how you set it up! Their meeting was so sweet, you can tell they have it for each other already! It was also nice how you brought in the other actors and their personalities. I'm looking forward to more! Thank you...I look forward to writing more.. |
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Post by Saphira on Sept 16, 2006 16:49:22 GMT -5
Oh this is a really good idea Christy! And I love the beginning! It's almost like how Anakin and Padme formed an attachement with eachother in the movie, but it was forbidden to them, like it is forbidden to them as actors. I think this is going to be really good and exciting! You know, honestly I think Hayden and Natalie would be great for eachother. I love the idea of them getting together while filming the movie to! But what if Lucas finds out? It'll be like the movie, they will have to hide their secret! But I believe George is wrong. Natalie and Hayden having feelings for eachother if anything will improve their acting! In their hearts, they will really feel the love of eachother. It won't just be acting!
LOL, and it seems Ewan has a crush on the actor who plays Dorme! Love what he says to Lucas, "What about friends with benefits" ROFL! ROLF!
Please write more Christy, I love this! This is going to be great, reading about Natalie and Hayden, and how they fall in love with eachother. I also really like reading about the actors and their personalities. Very interesting, I can't wait to learn more about them. Write more! Well done, beautiful beginning!
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Post by christyc21 on Sept 16, 2006 17:25:44 GMT -5
Thank you so much Saphira...Yes..this is what I was going for..Oh me too...I wish they were together...They seem so good for each other..like Hayden said "It wasn't hard for him to look at her(Natalie) with loving eyes" and as for Lucas finding out..well you just have to wait and see..and yes..George is wrong..I agree..but..for this story..i guess its "important" that he "thinks he's right" about that..
Yeah..he kinda does..I'm debating on whether to make it more..also I was going to use Sabe but then, I realized I would have to use Keira Knightley and well in my opinion I like her with Orlando Bloom..so..anyways..I chose Dorme...
I'm glad you like it..Thank you so much for the comment..
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Post by Annie on Sept 19, 2006 21:44:30 GMT -5
I liked the parts about the shower and her getting attracted to him! Very nice imagery! Now they must deal with their forbidden feelings. I know what you mean about uncomfortable silences, I've been there!
Thanks for letting us know about your tests, I totally understand! Lots of people are going through the same thing, so is Saphira! And my daughter is bogged down and complaining about being stressed out. And it's so early in the year. It's good you care enough to put priority on it, sometimes my daughter doesn't. Good luck! We love having you here!
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Post by christyc21 on Sept 19, 2006 21:51:49 GMT -5
I liked the parts about the shower and her getting attracted to him! Very nice imagery! Now they must deal with their forbidden feelings. I know what you mean about uncomfortable silences, I've been there! Thanks for letting us know about your tests, I totally understand! Lots of people are going through the same thing, so is Saphira! And my daughter is bogged down and complaining about being stressed out. And it's so early in the year. It's good you care enough to put priority on it, sometimes my daughter doesn't. Good luck! We love having you here! Oh thank you very much..yeah,..its very nice imagery..especially since we know whats underneath that cloak of his...Natalie is/was a very lucky woman..getting to work with him..but now...I still say Hayden is hot..but, I have eyes for no other man besides my boyfriend... Oh you're welcome..I just didn't want ppl to think i gave up on it..Yeah...i'm really trying to study because, well to be in the medical field you need top grades..Your daughter too..what grade's she in?? It seems to be happening all over that place..I'm just glad PSAT's aren't anytime soon...otherwise..I'd Freak!...but yes...as I said earlier..i have to take my studies seriously...otherwise...well..it wouldn't be too good.... thanks for commenting and..well I hope to get more up as soon as possible.. |
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Post by Astrid on Oct 6, 2006 16:44:45 GMT -5
What an original idea, I wish they really could have been lovers in real life too! Keep it coming!
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 6, 2006 17:51:22 GMT -5
What an original idea, I wish they really could have been lovers in real life too! Keep it coming! Thanks..I know, i wish they were too..i'm working on it, i've been studying this past week for tests but now i got a free weekend..so i'm getting busy on that story..glad you like it ;D |
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Post by Astrid on Oct 11, 2006 12:33:28 GMT -5
I do like it. It's cool how the actors are feeling a lot of what their characters did. So cute the way he got spaced during his lunch thinking about her. Good portrayal of Ewan as well!
So sorry to hear about the loss in your family. You just take the time you need and come back whenever you can. We care.
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 11, 2006 15:21:55 GMT -5
Thanks..that is what i'm trying to go for..make them different yet totally the same as their character...I was wondering if I got him right...
Its hard..but..He's in a better place now..I wouldn't wish him back into the hellhole we call earth..so...I'm accepting it..but thanks for understanding..I know you all care..you guys are kinda like a familiy away from my family..cause..no one in my real family gets Star Wars or anything like that...but here..it is Awesome!! Thanks again..
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Post by Annie on Oct 11, 2006 17:39:37 GMT -5
Aw, that's very sweet of you, Christy ((hugs)) I love you all too, my Star Wars family.
My deepest sympathy at this sad time. You're right, he is in a better place, but it's still hard for those of us who miss them.
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 11, 2006 20:38:10 GMT -5
Its the truth ((hugs back)) I love you all too..Yeah, we're one big happy Star Wars family..
thank you Annie...yeah..it is hard..but we all get through it one day at a time...
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Post by Steller's Jay on Oct 12, 2006 21:11:03 GMT -5
My deepest sympathy to you christyw21. I lost my boyfriend back in April (on Hayden's birthday). We'd been together for ten years. I still go visit him where he's inurned and let him know what I'm doing. He left me his house, and I'm very happy there.
I hope the time in front of you is filled with loved ones.
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Post by Saphira on Oct 12, 2006 23:24:11 GMT -5
Your Welcome Christy! I think they do seem perfect for eachother to, Natalie and Hayden. They should have gotten together! But atleast we have fanfics like yours to imagine it happening!
Yes same here! I have been having tests to, well not all tests but assignments and stuff. Everyone is going through it to. It's very stressing sometimes. I agree to, it is good you care a lot about your work and are working hard in your studies! Good luck to you as well! And we love having you here to!
And I'm so sorry to hear of your loss Christy. My deepest sympathy goes to you as well, I know how you feel. I've lost loved ones to. It's never easy. But you are right, he's in a better place now, watching over you. As long as you remember him his memory will never fade. I know it's still hard though, losing a loved one. Just remember even if you can't see them there always there. I love you to, and my whole Star Wars family here.*huggles* We'll all be here for you if you need us.
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