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Post by anakinsgirl on Oct 13, 2006 10:28:06 GMT -5
Sorry about your loss.  Great story by the way.  |
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 15, 2006 20:18:20 GMT -5
Yeah...i was sad..but...He is in a better place now so i can't be sad about that...Thanks, I'm glad you like it
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 15, 2006 20:22:16 GMT -5
My deepest sympathy to you christyw21. I lost my boyfriend back in April (on Hayden's birthday). We'd been together for ten years. I still go visit him where he's inurned and let him know what I'm doing. He left me his house, and I'm very happy there. I hope the time in front of you is filled with loved ones. I'm sorry to hear that...I can't even imagine..what..what you must have went through...My boyfriend now...if i lost him...i'd be gone too..because..he is my everything..he has my heart..my soul...if he goes..I am basically gone as well..I'm glad you are happy though, that's good to hear...and thank you.. |
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 15, 2006 20:26:13 GMT -5
Your Welcome Christy! I think they do seem perfect for eachother to, Natalie and Hayden. They should have gotten together! But atleast we have fanfics like yours to imagine it happening! Yes same here! I have been having tests to, well not all tests but assignments and stuff. Everyone is going through it to. It's very stressing sometimes. I agree to, it is good you care a lot about your work and are working hard in your studies! Good luck to you as well! And we love having you here to! And I'm so sorry to hear of your loss Christy. My deepest sympathy goes to you as well, I know how you feel. I've lost loved ones to. It's never easy. But you are right, he's in a better place now, watching over you. As long as you remember him his memory will never fade. I know it's still hard though, losing a loved one. Just remember even if you can't see them there always there. I love you to, and my whole Star Wars family here.*huggles* We'll all be here for you if you need us. Yeah..they do..maybe we should give them the right push..who knows..maybe they'll come to this site and read all the stories and realize it.. Thank you..Yes..you are absolutley right..I agree with you 100% yes..I love my Star Wars family (hugs) ;D |
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Oct 20, 2006 23:45:59 GMT -5
So nice that they finally told each other of their feelings! Great scene! Can't wait for more!
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Post by Annie on Oct 22, 2006 19:52:54 GMT -5
Yeah, they kissed! You portrayed his shy manner perfectly, so cute! Good thing she moved first, he may have been too afraid! Looks like things are going great now, can't wait to see what happens in Italy!
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 22, 2006 22:07:22 GMT -5
Yeah, they kissed! You portrayed his shy manner perfectly, so cute! Good thing she moved first, he may have been too afraid! Looks like things are going great now, can't wait to see what happens in Italy! Thanks...yeah..I always hope i get their mannerisms and personalities right...because that is a key thing..at least for me..but I'm glad you like it...i know..well..i can't tell you it will be great..but..somewhat difficult as well..may even get a little suprise guest..  |
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Post by Astrid on Oct 25, 2006 12:39:56 GMT -5
You got them right and it all seemed very natural. I love what you are doing here, do not stop!
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 25, 2006 16:00:36 GMT -5
You got them right and it all seemed very natural. I love what you are doing here, do not stop! Thanks ;D ;D..I'm so glad people like this story..Everyone's support means a lot to me..so Thanks everyone!! |
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Post by samantha on Oct 26, 2006 3:20:18 GMT -5
Exactly what I thought myself when I reread the part, you know? To get things naturally in a story is very important, from my point of view . For if you don't, the story may ring false from beginning to end, and it absolutely doesn't in Chrityw21's case ;D. Hayden's quite the reserved, humble and discret kind, and so far a I've seen, you got that right, Dearest . The funny thing is, in one of the writings of my own (Viking modern Saga), and what will be done next for the retranscription for my web-site (please read my blog for more information), the character named Hayden Thorvald echoes the very same with the one called Samantha Rosenwood (my Witch's name)  ! Kisses, Sam. |
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Post by christyc21 on Oct 30, 2006 16:52:36 GMT -5
Exactly what I thought myself when I reread the part, you know? To get things naturally in a story is very important, from my point of view . For if you don't, the story may ring false from beginning to end, and it absolutely doesn't in Christyw21's case ;D. Hayden's quite the reserved, humble and discret kind, and so far a I've seen, you got that right, Dearest . The funny thing is, in one of the writings of my own (Viking modern Saga), and what will be done next for the retranscription for my web-site (please read my blog for more information), the character named Hayden Thorvald echoes the very same with the one called Samantha Rosenwood (my Witch's name) ! Kisses, Sam. Thanks so much...I'm glad you think that...I try to get it to be as natural as I can..I hate story's that totally change the characters..well..I mean..some i can handle..but others...esh...anyways...I'm working on the next chapter..so I hope you all like it... |
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Post by Annie on Oct 31, 2006 19:23:36 GMT -5
I am so sorry to hear about your dog  What a time to go. He is in a good place, with all my beloved doggies and kitties I've lost. I know we'll see them again one day. Don't worry, just post whenever you can, if you notice some of us take weeks or more to come up with a new chapter. Take care, I care (((hugs))) |
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Post by samantha on Nov 1, 2006 5:00:50 GMT -5
Christy, I've too lost my beloved dog last year, I know also what you're going through. Annie's right, write whenever you can, take your time, all right?
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by christyc21 on Nov 1, 2006 16:47:48 GMT -5
Christy, I've too lost my beloved dog last year, I know also what you're going through. Annie's right, write whenever you can, take your time, all right? Kisses, Sam. Thank you both so much! Yeah...well its better he went in peace on my birthday than suffer through any more painful days..again..Thank you both...that cheered me up a lot!!! |
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Post by samantha on Nov 23, 2006 15:15:15 GMT -5
Usually, around this time of the night, I should be reading a book, but since I've updatd my Internet Explorer, and getting familiar with it, I decided to see how the view was from here, and here I'm finding your new addition, Christy ;D! You've emphasized a lot on the teasing nature of Hayden, inherited from his astrological sign, the Aries (btw, most of my friends are Aries, and it goes like this almost 24 hours a day! Which is indeed the very endearing part of their nature. They love to tease, to have some fun, to live, so to speak. And they're humble and generous all the same) . Hayden Thorvald is akind to that with Samantha Rosenwood . Natalie's reaction when he catches her from behind would surprisingly been Samantha's also with Thorvald. This is so weird, you know  ? Our works are echoing each other so much, Christy, that's beyond belief, although the context are differing ;D! However, only one line bothered me a little bit...  It sounded very much unlike Hayden into my ears, it really did  . I mean, it ruined a bit the feeling of forbidden love taken right under everybody else's noses to me, in a very challenging fashion which can't be denied . But Hayden is not of the conceited kind, he never would have come up with something like that  . And as a matter of fact, Thorvald never addressed Samantha like that either . Save for that, you got it very much all right, Christy. It's been a pleasure reading you a bit again, nevertheless ! Kisses, Sam. |
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