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Post by christyc21 on Dec 6, 2006 21:03:25 GMT -5
Good telling of the sand scene, that was one of my favorites. Now everytime I see it, I will be thinking of this story! It was fun to think of them actually holding back feelings during the scenes where the characters were falling in love. You are doing an excellent job of paralleling their love and the characters' love, and both forbidden! I love everything about how you tell it! Thank you so much Annie!! I'm always glad to hear this...I never want to dissapoint my readers so I always try to get the story to flow and feel right...so Thank you..it means a lot to me.. |
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Post by arie on Dec 6, 2006 21:50:02 GMT -5
I'm disappointed that ff.net made you take this one off. I think it's definitely one of the best NatalieHayden fics I've read. I'll be waiting for more of the "Christensen charm"!!!!  |
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 6, 2006 22:35:49 GMT -5
I'm disappointed that ff.net made you take this one off. I think it's definitely one of the best NatalieHayden fics I've read. I'll be waiting for more of the "Christensen charm"!!!! Yes, as am I..but again, I can still post it here..and I didn't want my account deleted. Wow... thank you...wow...hahahaha..oh I'm working on it.. |
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Post by arie on Dec 18, 2006 20:48:21 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D What a great installment! I was a bit fearful there for a moment that they were caught.  Nice work, Christy. Keep writing! |
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 18, 2006 20:57:16 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D What a great installment! I was a bit fearful there for a moment that they were caught. Nice work, Christy. Keep writing! hahaha thanks...yeah i was too..and I was writing it..lol.. thanks again..oh believe me I will.. |
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Post by samantha on Dec 19, 2006 4:19:23 GMT -5
My Goodness, I'm glad to read a bit more from you again, for I'll leave to travel for the holidays next week end, Christy.
Erwan's intervention was a very good idea, exactly what I thought you would do. Also, Georges was into a very I-told-you-so lecturing mode with Hayden, who went on with a downright lie to cut it short. A very good point.
When Natalie's reveals why the letter she's just received is giving her so much sorrow, and I saw Hayden's protective bent rising up to the surface, I got reminded how much Thorvald's with Rosenwood into a similar situation in my modern Viking Saga, save Thorvald got an interaction with the guy in question. It was chapter 7.
What I mean is, you've well rendered Hayden's Viking ancestry blood running into his veins in this paragraph. For the improvised downright lie was very cunning and risky, and well-found. And the protective bent reaction was Viking indeed all the way through! For in the Ancient times, Vikings were often becoming protectors of important personalities under their responsability. It's even told that during the crusades, they assured the safety of the travelers. So, my only guess is that in here, Hayden will be assuring Natalie's safety at all costs, too.
Great installment indeed!
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by Annie on Dec 19, 2006 7:40:51 GMT -5
What a close call, I was worried! So it appears Ewan knows, or suspects, kind of like Obiwan? I loved the Jedi mind tricks jokes! You are so good at connecting this to the SW story. It's great! |
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Post by Astrid on Dec 19, 2006 10:34:03 GMT -5
Look out kids! They must see George as Anakin saw the Jedi! Another very enjoyable chapter. Your story is so much fun.
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 19, 2006 11:54:01 GMT -5
thank you all for the comments..
Yes, sam, this is Hayden's protective nature shining through..I'm glad I posted when i did then..
Annie you got it exactley right..he definitely suspects something..
thank you..i try my best
yeah something like that astraltravler...
thanks again for the comments..I'm working on the next part..it should be up in 2 days...
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Post by Annie on Dec 26, 2006 20:08:57 GMT -5
Oops, he almost called her Mrs. Christensen! This Tyler has sure thrown a new loop into the story! Who is he and what will he do? If she can prove he's her stalker, he should be fired! Maybe George can get rid of him anyway since he's upsetting her. Hayden wouldn't mind, he's making things hard for him too! I'm glad you're on vacation so you can have more time to write. Update soon please!  |
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 27, 2006 10:08:57 GMT -5
Oops, he almost called her Mrs. Christensen! This Tyler has sure thrown a new loop into the story! Who is he and what will he do? If she can prove he's her stalker, he should be fired! Maybe George can get rid of him anyway since he's upsetting her. Hayden wouldn't mind, he's making things hard for him too! I'm glad you're on vacation so you can have more time to write. Update soon please! Yeah..i see you got that..lol yeah...I searched for a new character..so I decided to use on from the cast..and found him...Gordon Tyler, stand-in for Hayden..I thought he'd be good..since he'd be close on the set..sort of like easy access to Natalie..well they'd have to get some hard evidence for it..but..well...you'll see what happens.. yeah i am too..although I'm kind of missing school..and my friends..mostly my boyfriend and friends..my boyfriend is in California..visiting his dad..I got to talk to him the other day and the first thing he said was Thank God there's life out there..anyways..I'm working on the next update, so might be today or tomorrow.. |
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Post by Astrid on Dec 27, 2006 10:45:11 GMT -5
Oh no, this guy could be real trouble. But she burned the picture so she can't prove it. Now she'll have to do a lot of worrying. Good thing Hayden is there to protect her!
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 27, 2006 13:13:37 GMT -5
Oh no, this guy could be real trouble. But she burned the picture so she can't prove it. Now she'll have to do a lot of worrying. Good thing Hayden is there to protect her! yeah...he is quite the trouble maker isn't he..and he just got there.. yeah..well we'll see what happens later on for him..yes its a very good thing Hayden is there to protect her.. |
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Post by arie on Dec 28, 2006 19:08:44 GMT -5
What a great chapter! Please keep writing! I'm really starting to get into the story... what, with Tyler there now. The suspense.
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Post by Astrid on Dec 29, 2006 11:00:56 GMT -5
Poor poor Nat! They have to get that guy out of there or she won't be able to function. This does give her a chance to get closer to Hayden, her hero! Nice way you left them there, very romantic!
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