juliskywalker
Jedi Knight
*THERE'S NO GREATER MISERY THAN TO REMEMBER WITH BITTER REGRET A DAY WHEN YOU WERE HAPPY*
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Post by juliskywalker on Nov 23, 2006 16:55:11 GMT -5
i love your story, you're going in the rigth direction, but u can maybe make them interact with other actors, like for example make hayden jelaus of gael!! that would be fun, but hey it's just a suggestion
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Post by Annie on Nov 23, 2006 23:48:08 GMT -5
Good to have you back!!
Now they're really into their relationship and having to worry! Will their affection show on the set, or will they be able to pass it off as just acting? Very interesting! Please update again soon!
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Post by arie on Nov 24, 2006 23:02:54 GMT -5
Great to have ya back!  The best line was: "“Ooo can’t resist the Christensen charm can you…”" (No I can't) Haha. |
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Post by Saphira on Nov 27, 2006 9:39:36 GMT -5
I just caught up with your story today, I am very sorry for taking so long! I'm loving this!! So now Hayden and Natalie have expressed their feelings for eachother!! But, like the characters they are playing, the love they desire is forbidden, 'against the rules!' I love when Hayden meets her when she is leaving her trailer! They can't be seen by the others! I'm really enjoying this! It'll be great to see how the story goes on, and as Anakin and Padme's love grows, so will Hayden and Natalie's. I'm curious to see how they will hide their secret. Can they really keep it secret forever? However, I think they are really going to enjoy the parts in the movies together. No one will realise that it's not all just acting! They really do love eachother! And I wonder if Ewan and Rose feel the same! They, like Natalie and Hayden, will have to deal with their love, and keep it secret from everyone else!! "“Ah, I laugh in the face of danger…hahaha…” said Hayden with a serious face. Love this line, I could see him saying that to! I can also see Anakin saying just that line! I enjoy in the story when they say things to do with Star Wars, it's really funny! I am loving this, keep it coming Christy!! Write more!! Well done!!!! Also, it's Christy's own right to decide where she wants the story to go and what she wants the characters to say. I think it's great so far, keep it up! |
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Post by Astrid on Nov 27, 2006 11:00:35 GMT -5
Christy I love everything you've done so far, just the way you tell it! keep up the good work!
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Post by christyc21 on Nov 27, 2006 17:13:49 GMT -5
i love your story, you're going in the rigth direction, but u can maybe make them interact with other actors, like for example make hayden jelaus of gael!! that would be fun, but hey it's just a suggestion Thanks, I'm glad to know you like it..and I will be having them interact with the others....but you'll have to see what I have in store for them....  |
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Post by christyc21 on Nov 27, 2006 17:18:11 GMT -5
I just caught up with your story today, I am very sorry for taking so long! I'm loving this!! So now Hayden and Natalie have expressed their feelings for eachother!! But, like the characters they are playing, the love they desire is forbidden, 'against the rules!' I love when Hayden meets her when she is leaving her trailer! They can't be seen by the others! I'm really enjoying this! It'll be great to see how the story goes on, and as Anakin and Padme's love grows, so will Hayden and Natalie's. I'm curious to see how they will hide their secret. Can they really keep it secret forever? However, I think they are really going to enjoy the parts in the movies together. No one will realise that it's not all just acting! They really do love eachother! And I wonder if Ewan and Rose feel the same! They, like Natalie and Hayden, will have to deal with their love, and keep it secret from everyone else!! "“Ah, I laugh in the face of danger…hahaha…” said Hayden with a serious face. Love this line, I could see him saying that to! I can also see Anakin saying just that line! I enjoy in the story when they say things to do with Star Wars, it's really funny! I am loving this, keep it coming Christy!! Write more!! Well done!!!! Also, it's Christy's own right to decide where she wants the story to go and what she wants the characters to say. I think it's great so far, keep it up! Thank you so much...makes me feel very Happy to know my story is receiving such great feedback... I know...That was my favorite part to write... And thank you for that last bit...I have seen where people often lose their inspiration to write with the negative feedback for Their idea...I say, if people don't like it, then don't read it..but don't leave a harsh negative comment...because that could really..err...destroy or hurt..somebody... |
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Post by Steller's Jay on Nov 28, 2006 0:14:07 GMT -5
I love this story, christyw21, and how you tell us what they're thinking. The beginning of a relationship is always a little scary and very romantic. I thought the "Christensen charm" line was fine and fit right in with Hayden's teasing character.
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Post by christyc21 on Nov 28, 2006 16:38:33 GMT -5
I love this story, christyw21, and how you tell us what they're thinking. The beginning of a relationship is always a little scary and very romantic. I thought the "Christensen charm" line was fine and fit right in with Hayden's teasing character. Thank you!! I'm always glad to hear it..yes it is, but always quite wonderful as well...hehehehe thanks..I thought so too..I could just picture him saying that too..with that teasing smile he had in AOTC... |
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juliskywalker
Jedi Knight
*THERE'S NO GREATER MISERY THAN TO REMEMBER WITH BITTER REGRET A DAY WHEN YOU WERE HAPPY*
Posts: 162
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Post by juliskywalker on Nov 28, 2006 23:00:40 GMT -5
Thanks, I'm glad to know you like it..and I will be having them interact with the others....but you'll have to see what I have in store for them.... [/quote] yay!! i hope you upload soon, i can't wait to read what's next |
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Post by samantha on Nov 29, 2006 5:47:13 GMT -5
I got the point finely, now, thanks to your PM, Christy. Thanks! I'm looking forward reading the rest, now!
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by samantha on Dec 6, 2006 4:02:30 GMT -5
It's right out of bed that I've read your update Christy. It was quite a sweet, very sweet moment you've produced here. Everything was well-timed and falling into place.
I loved the part when Hayden betrayed his uneasiness when he sensed Natalie's. Sometimes, Thorvald gets uneasy when he senses Rosenwood's apprehension, very much for the same reasons, although it's been a while I didn't take my pen. Thank you for reminding me how much I loved those moments.
When I've reached the trailer's part, I found it quite bold and risky from Hayden's share to go there for the kiss practicing, for on a set, it's not uncommon to get a staff member noising around by simply gazing out of the window, no matter if the curtains are shut, shadows don't lie. To me, the danger's never been more closer than ever, and that's what I liked best in the scene...
Per say, I well recognized Hayden all the way through!
Kisses,
Sam.
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Post by Astrid on Dec 6, 2006 11:53:57 GMT -5
Oh no almost busted by George!!
I love the kiss, and how they joked about the movie characters with 'milady.' Very cute! Good story!
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 6, 2006 17:54:10 GMT -5
Thank you both Sam and astraltravler...I'm glad you both like it....it's definitely getting more challenging to write now that they actually have to hide their love...but I love a challenge and love writing this story...Thanks for taking the time to comment the story...again glad you enjoyed it!!
Love ya,
Christy
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Post by Annie on Dec 6, 2006 20:32:21 GMT -5
Good telling of the sand scene, that was one of my favorites. Now everytime I see it, I will be thinking of this story! It was fun to think of them actually holding back feelings during the scenes where the characters were falling in love. You are doing an excellent job of paralleling their love and the characters' love, and both forbidden! I love everything about how you tell it!
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