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Post by Annie on Nov 25, 2006 21:42:04 GMT -5
Wolf is back, safe and sound, I was worried! But now Palps knows about him? He has been prowling the rotunda? What place did Palps see in the mirror? I am so afraid of what he is thinking now.
Oh! The scene goes down between Mace and Anakin! Anakin is staying, Mace is going...now the big faceoff with Palps is at hand! Since Wolf and Virginia are on the scene, things are going to be different, but how?? I am hanging off my seat!
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Post by Astrid on Nov 27, 2006 10:16:25 GMT -5
What role is Wolf going to play in the fights? This keeps getting better and better!
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Post by Astrid on Nov 29, 2006 13:10:31 GMT -5
Wonderful action scene in the Chancellor's office! I hope Palps IS dead and Anakin isn't! What happened, Anakin killed him just as the Sith lightning fried him too? Mace is dead, or gone, but who did it? I am with Wolf I would have wanted to scream too. I can't wait to see what is breaking loose!
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Post by Annie on Nov 29, 2006 21:34:21 GMT -5
Eeeeek! It must have been so hard to stand there and not do something to change the outcome. That was very, very exciting, and worrysome!
Anakin cannot be dead, the way you described him laying there with his messy blond hair was so sad. What will the turn of the key bring? This is going to be good!
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Nov 29, 2006 22:35:27 GMT -5
What a cliff hanger! More More! I hope Palps is really dead and Anakin alive...... can't wait for more!
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Post by Steller's Jay on Dec 10, 2006 12:46:10 GMT -5
Chapter XII, Part 2 I hope Anakin isn't dead; maybe they can help him. I think he will live, so we can all FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENED IN THAT OFFICE!!! I'm dying to know.  Guess I'll just have to go and read the first part of the next chapter!  |
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Post by Steller's Jay on Dec 10, 2006 12:52:18 GMT -5
Chapter 13, Part I
I'm being pretty happy, because I expect the dwarves are helping Anakin to live. (They better be.) At first, I thought that "glass coffin" was really a glass coffin!
I suspect Sidious shriveled up like Dorian Gray after Gray destroyed his portrait. Sidious is probably extremely old.
I think it's hilarious that Organa found a "miniature man" waiting for him! I could just picture him standing there while the dwarf read that paper to him. I hope he believes him; I suspect he will act on it anyway. He'd better take care of Mas Amedda ASAP!
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Post by Annie on Dec 10, 2006 21:24:01 GMT -5
A 'glass coffin', dwarves, a mirror, I have a guess as to what will crossover here next, and I like it! Even if that's not it I know it will still be good! There is still danger, and Organa has to stop it, Anakin is sure in no shape. I am glad (though grossed out) to know how Palps ended up! |
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Post by Astrid on Dec 11, 2006 10:18:52 GMT -5
The mood remains intense. Can Anakin be preserved? What of Virginia and Wolf now? Update again soon please!
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Post by Steller's Jay on Dec 15, 2006 19:57:03 GMT -5
Chapter 13, part 2
Organa took the opportunity to
send one of the clones to summon Padme, though he was mystified about what she could possibly
do.
*raises hand and jumps up and down*
I know! I know! She’s going to kiss him and wake him up! *runs off to read the rest of the chapter*
Hey, I was right! Well, sort of. What a great chapter, crystalcat. I could imagine and almost feel Padme’s pain as she watched the hologram. And now he’s alive!
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Dec 16, 2006 1:33:22 GMT -5
AWESOME! He's Alive! WOO HOO!~
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Post by Steller's Jay on Dec 16, 2006 11:55:34 GMT -5
Wow, what a neat ending, tying up everything. And you actually include George in the story (in the third person, anyway). That's so cool! Anakin and Padme lived happily ever after!  I bet he opened up a fix-it shop, too.  I had actually entertained the idea of having Sola's husband run an electronics shop, and Anakin would be in the back, fixing things! Thanks for this great story, sohna! Your imagination is tremendous. |
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Post by Annie on Dec 17, 2006 20:26:45 GMT -5
  That was BEAUTIFUL!!!!  Even better and sweeter than I had hoped for. Her speech about how they were destroyed was so sad. Then her joy when her tears of love saved him! I loved it!  Good idea and very well done! Epilogue: Awesome how you explained the George Lucas thing! It is real! That was a complicated thing to figure out and tell, but it worked! I almost believe it happened!
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Post by Astrid on Dec 19, 2006 11:25:19 GMT -5
I love, love love the ending and the wrapup! The Snow White overtones were perfect. Please write a sequel telling us about their life afterward. How about having Virginia and Wolf find another story's characters to save?
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 19, 2006 18:25:35 GMT -5
Please write a sequel telling us about their life afterward. How about having Virginia and Wolf find another story's characters to save? Sorry, I can't make myself do it. This was my swan song so far as Virginia & Wolf go. I was in that fandom a long time and got very burned out on it - managed to get this one more story out, but no more. If you like them, please see my fanfiction archive (of various authors) at www.angelfire.com/tv2/kingdomspress/index.html - but if you haven't also rent the DVD first for the background story. Glad you enjoyed it, though! Thank you! |
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