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Post by arie on Nov 2, 2006 16:00:50 GMT -5
Thanks oodles to astraltraveler and crystalcat! Your comments made me feel warm and fuzzy inside.  |
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Nov 4, 2006 2:12:17 GMT -5
Really enjoyed the characters...... Leia and Anakin getting along so well and Leia feeling the force in him.... awesome...... can't wait for more!
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Post by arie on Nov 4, 2006 11:38:45 GMT -5
Thanks! ;D I really enjoy working with these characters, but since some of them don't really interact in the canon, it's hard work to figure them out, you know? I appreciate that you are enjoying what I have done so far... I intend to post more of this story later today... but beware of the cliffhangers... anyone who follows this story already can tell you... they're EVERYWHERE! LOL. |
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Post by arie on Nov 5, 2006 12:18:10 GMT -5
Oh, and I didn't thank Annie for her comments! So sorry. Thanks a bunch, Annie! ;D
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Post by crystalcat on Nov 6, 2006 21:15:16 GMT -5
Well, technically he's already dead, so dying shouldn't be as much of a problem as it would otherwise -- at least we know Padme is waiting for him. In fact, if you hadn't primed us by telling us about some darkness that's re-entered the galaxy, I'd think you were about to wrap everything up: Anakin dies for Leia and then the old guy tells her who Skye really was. But I think you probably have something a bit longer in mind, so am curious to see how you get him out of this.
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Post by arie on Nov 7, 2006 7:47:25 GMT -5
Thank you for the comments! Yes, I can see how this could possibly be the end, but it's not! He can't die because he's technically not alive? He's technically not dead, he's alive... from a certain point of view. Perhaps later, it will become more evident that our Ani is truly ALIVE.  |
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Post by Astrid on Nov 7, 2006 10:49:45 GMT -5
Noooo he can't die without letting her know who he was, not after all this! If he's alive, or technically not dead, well, let us know!
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Post by arie on Nov 7, 2006 16:44:14 GMT -5
;D You'll see!
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Post by Annie on Nov 24, 2006 23:40:45 GMT -5
He's alive, oh I'm so glad! He's hurt though, I like how you described his ordeal, and how Leia reacted. So Leia may be suspicious, she's feeling something, and Yoda can tell it. And Luke did!
Very good scene of him fighting the droid too, I could just see it all!
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Post by crystalcat on Nov 25, 2006 9:29:52 GMT -5
Oh, no, Luke recognized him immediately! But I can't imagine that Luke is this "dark side" thing Yoda and Obi-Wan are feeling... Still, how in the world is he going to convince Luke not to tell his sister? Especially since they're twins and she'd be able to tell if he's hiding something from her?
Please don't wait so long to post the next one!
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Post by arie on Nov 25, 2006 11:17:30 GMT -5
Oh, no, Luke recognized him immediately! But I can't imagine that Luke is this "dark side" thing Yoda and Obi-Wan are feeling... Still, how in the world is he going to convince Luke not to tell his sister? Especially since they're twins and she'd be able to tell if he's hiding something from her? Please don't wait so long to post the next one!  What comments! Well, Leia's not too experienced in the Force, so Luke may be able to hide it without extreme suspicion... thta is if Anakin can convince him to! Heehee! |
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Post by arie on Nov 25, 2006 11:19:20 GMT -5
He's alive, oh I'm so glad! He's hurt though, I like how you described his ordeal, and how Leia reacted. So Leia may be suspicious, she's feeling something, and Yoda can tell it. And Luke did! Very good scene of him fighting the droid too, I could just see it all! Annie! I'm so glad you liked the fight scene! I worked so hard on that!  I'm relieved Ani's okay too, it's always hard to see him hurt though... poor Ani. LOL. Yep, and Luke knows EXACTLY who he is! Dundundun! |
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Nov 29, 2006 23:07:38 GMT -5
wow..... great writing...... and Luke recognized his father, this should be good! can't wait for more!
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Post by arie on Nov 30, 2006 10:01:47 GMT -5
wow..... great writing...... and Luke recognized his father, this should be good! can't wait for more! Thankees! What great comments! |
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Post by Annie on Nov 30, 2006 22:16:01 GMT -5
Oh! Luke knows him! Is it because he sensed him? Is he going to tell Leia? And just when she and Han were getting on so well with "Skye." I hope it works out! Good storytelling, please post again soon!
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