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Post by arie on Dec 1, 2006 10:38:07 GMT -5
Oh! Luke knows him! Is it because he sensed him? Is he going to tell Leia? And just when she and Han were getting on so well with "Skye." I hope it works out! Good storytelling, please post again soon! Oh my gosh, what drama! LOL. Yes, maybe, perhaps, I know, and me too! THANKS! ;D |
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Post by Astrid on Dec 1, 2006 13:19:53 GMT -5
I am wondering, will she still like him once she knows who he is? Interesting you had her like him BEFORE finding out he was Vader. Now without her prejudice against him clouding her view, will she feel differently? Great drama indeed!
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Post by arie on Dec 1, 2006 16:45:55 GMT -5
I am wondering, will she still like him once she knows who he is? Interesting you had her like him BEFORE finding out he was Vader. Now without her prejudice against him clouding her view, will she feel differently? Great drama indeed! That, astraltraveler, is the burning question! You'll see what will happen in coming chaps.  |
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 15, 2006 15:47:05 GMT -5
Good that Luke has no problem - after the explanation - with going along with the charade. I just hope he doesn't slip up or something. And Artoo recognized him too!!! Can't wait to see what they get up to next!
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Post by arie on Dec 15, 2006 16:05:00 GMT -5
Yeah, the charade continues. ;D ;D
Glad you're still enjoying it!
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Post by Annie on Dec 17, 2006 23:36:05 GMT -5
I liked Luke's reaction and Anakin's explaination! Good job!
It's also good he told Luke about Leia being in danger, so now he can look out and help save her from the dark side too! But Leia is still in the 'dark' about his identity! I guess it will be revealed when the time is right!
Please post again soon!
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Post by arie on Dec 18, 2006 9:55:10 GMT -5
I liked Luke's reaction and Anakin's explaination! Good job! It's also good he told Luke about Leia being in danger, so now he can look out and help save her from the dark side too! But Leia is still in the 'dark' about his identity! I guess it will be revealed when the time is right! Please post again soon! It will be revealed... but not a moment too soon, after all it is the premise of the story.  Glad you are still enjoying it. Thanks so much, Annie! |
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Post by Astrid on Dec 19, 2006 10:44:59 GMT -5
A bullet dodged! I am wondering if her feelings will ever show her the true identity of Skye. It sounds like they're getting ready for a fun adventure. It's going to be cool to see Anakin and his kids do stuff together!
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Post by Saphira on Dec 19, 2006 19:10:36 GMT -5
Hello Arie! I have been reading your story, A Father's Love, and I've now finished it, and I can tell you, now I want MORE!!  I am finding this really enjoyable! This is a very original story idea! I love how Anakin was brought back by the force, looking the way he did before he joined the dark Side. When he was still in the light! I'm glad he was brought back to see his children again, and help Leia from being tempted to the dark side! They have no idea, to them, they all think he is Skye Nairn. (which I think is a really cool name, at least he has an awesome undercover name!) Neither Han or Leia realised who he really was! If only they knew! I love how Anakin gets along with them, Han and Leia. And it was really funny when Han was thinking Anakin might love Leia! HA! He does, but not in that way which Han loves Leia! I love how he impresses them with his skills! There all getting along so well. Ah, but if they knew the truth, would they think the same of Skye? I really enjoyed the part in their escape from Escarte, and how Anakin remembered how he and Obi-Wan had been there before and in similar situations. I'm glad you brought Travale into the story! He was in the book Labyrinth of Evil wasn't he? I love the big battles with the droid and the Imperials. Thank goodness Anakin was there to safe them! Though he got badly hurt! I'm glad he's alright! I feel sorry for Travale, but he died helping them! At least he was free for awhile and helped them escape. I love how protective Anakin is of Leia and of the others. Just like he always was! Always putting his life at risk to safe everyone else, like he did with Obi-Wan and Padme and many others. Never worrying for himself! I also love how Anakin is noticing how much Leia is like him and Padme! Her argumentative tendencies and his stubbornness!! Teehee! It's great Anakin is getting to spend some time with his daughter like he always should have, it's just to bad she can't know yet who he really is! I can only imagine how shocked they will all be when they discover the truth. What will they think of him then? Will Leia hate him? Will she be able to forgive him? Will Han be able to accept him after that? Will any of them? I'm glad Luke knows his dad is here. But it's going to be hard for Luke, to pretend he's just Skye and not his dad. I'm glad Luke understands though. And he'll help Anakin when the time comes to reveal his secret. But who is this dark presence Obi-Wan, Yoda, and Padme warned him about? I'm worried! This next mission there going on-something tells me their going to get into danger along the way! Well Done Arie, I am loving your story!! Now get writing, and post more or I'll be very angry! ROFL, jk! Can't wait to read more! Seriously I'll be very angry if you don't update soon. |
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Post by arie on Dec 19, 2006 22:19:31 GMT -5
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Post by arie on Dec 19, 2006 22:20:16 GMT -5
And thanks to astraltraveler!  |
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Post by Annie on Dec 30, 2006 12:27:06 GMT -5
This was a very good and deep chapter! You describe everything and get into their feelings so well. Leia growing in the force, and her bond with "Skye." It's good she likes him so much, and he can use their new bond to help her. She still has much fear!
An appearance by the ghosts too, good convo there too! Great job!
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 31, 2006 9:23:36 GMT -5
Someone STOLE the mechanism? Does that mean that a certain Sith lord is going to revisit them all now, I wonder?
And why do I think everything won't go as smoothly as Padme described for her visit. Somehow I doubt she will be able to leave "on time" - what exactly happens if she dies again? Is it just that she will have to experience the pain of death - or is there a worse outcome if so? Either way it will make Skye's and Leia's fears closer together (which may be your intent).
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Post by Astrid on Jan 2, 2007 10:40:40 GMT -5
Come on Padme, you can do it! What will Skye do when he sees her? Still hoping for a happy family reunion!
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Post by arie on Jan 5, 2007 10:44:07 GMT -5
Thanks bunches everyone! Because of your lovely comments, I'll be sure to post another chapter (or two) SOON.
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