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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Dec 3, 2006 13:21:37 GMT -5
I love seeing Vader in that big, bulky suit, being so loving and caring for his children, its how I would picture him, if he indeed found out he had children...... and that Padme was alive...... well done, can't wait for more!
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Post by christyc21 on Dec 5, 2006 22:40:00 GMT -5
I love it!! Dorme was way out of line saying that Padme wasn't doing what was best for her children and I love it when Padme tells Dorme that her precious Obi-wan isn't all that perfect..I apologize if that seems harsh but I've had a sore spot since Epi III, when he came out of the ship,on Mustafar, and that made Anakin snap...but anyways..enough on my opinion..Awesome story...can't wait to read more!!
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 8, 2006 19:20:01 GMT -5
Oh, no, I was hoping Dorme was beginning to see Anakin in the suit instead of Vader. Now it sounds as if she's going to run off to tattle to Obi-Wan again. Or at least not let them know she wrote in the first place (or was she trying to find a reason not to tell?). Anyway, I hope this doesn't put her off telling Padme she wrote to him for fear of losing her job.
Like I said before, PLEASE don't go so long between postings again!
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Post by Annie on Dec 11, 2006 0:27:38 GMT -5
Leia having bad dreams, just like her Dad! How awful of Dorme to misjudge him. She is such an Obi-Wan kiss up, I wonder if she may have feelings for him herself?
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Dec 12, 2006 1:19:49 GMT -5
Great scene where Luke and Leia see their father's face! Awesome~!
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 12, 2006 21:42:21 GMT -5
Good! Sidious was fooled into thinking he really did die. I only wonder now what he will do about it - will he go looking for a new apprentice, for instance?
I absolutely loved the scene where Luke & Leia first see their father's face - it was marred only by Dorme and her (what sounds to me like) sour grapes. I just have the feeling she's going to cause trouble for them sometime soon...
And a SECOND new chapter! Wow, this is really heating up, here! And he's finally resolved to find a way out of his prison - YAY! Please keep the chapters coming!
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Post by Annie on Dec 12, 2006 21:55:22 GMT -5
I hope the faked death works! The parts where they were loving with him out of the chamber were very good, I always wondered how that would be. How sad he had to go back in! I hope now he can find a way to be cured!
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Dec 13, 2006 1:56:07 GMT -5
great scene with Padme and Vader in the Chamber! whooooo hooooooo
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 15, 2006 15:56:21 GMT -5
I wonder who Padme has in mind to help them - I sort of hope it isn't Bail Organa again; I just have a feeling all his moves are being watched by Palpatine's minions; this is exactly what will tip him off that Anakin isn't really dead (if he wasn't tipped off by the nightmare Vader just had).
And at least they do realize that Dorme could have contacted Obi-Wan. I'm not sure he would think to follow them to Polis Massa (that is, unless Dorme leaves a trail of bread crumbs for him). Still he needs to wait awhile before finding them again - to give Vader a chance to turn further back into Anakin.
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 17, 2006 10:36:28 GMT -5
I wondered if Nejaa might become instrumental in convincing Obi-Wan. Now it looks like Obi-Wan might just arrive too late - like right after they just left. The only problem being, of course, that the hyperbaric chamber (if he sees it) will give away to him that Vader & Padme are together ...
I hope they can stay one step ahead of Obi-Wan at least until Vader has healed and has had more time to get rid of the darkness. Right now I think it isn't helping his still wanting revenge since he's still bearing the physical scars.
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Post by Annie on Dec 17, 2006 23:17:48 GMT -5
So all the 'right' people believe he's dead, and his trusted friends know he's alive? Then others, like Obi-Wan will still need to believe he's changed. The trip ahead is for his healing? I hope so. The scene with the kids asking about his mask was very sad. I want him healthy (and hot) again!
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 19, 2006 18:16:52 GMT -5
Oh, no, I've got a bad feeling about this. They're going off and leaving the twins behind? Not good. At least Nejaa is there; otherwise they'd probably never see them again. I just hope Obi-Wan and Dorme together don't convince Nejaa that Vader is unredeemable. The twins would know better but they're too young to run off and find their parents alone.
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 20, 2006 16:32:31 GMT -5
So far so good - at least they didn't say outright that they can't do anything. But I have to say if I was Vader, I'd wonder about letting them do tests on me - after what the empire just did to them, they could decide on a little retribution. Sometimes risks have to be taken though.
I'm still wondering what's going on with Dorme, Nejaa, the twins, and Obi-Wan possibly showing up - can't wait for what you have coming next.
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 20, 2006 21:56:00 GMT -5
Oh, well, I never doubted that they could do it - if not here then somewhere else. But I like how you make each story slightly different than the previous one over exactly how it's done. So he can be whole within a week -- good, but will that be enough time to get back to the twins before Obi-Wan gets there (and hopefully move to another location). On the bright side, might Dorme have confessed to Nejaa in the meanwhile?
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Post by crystalcat on Dec 22, 2006 12:19:40 GMT -5
Well, both Vader and Obi-Wan are experiencing delays in getting to Delaya - I wonder if this means they will arrive at approximately the same time? And Dorme really does have a crush on Obi-Wan, doesn't she? Funny to see how Nejaa is so amused by it. I just hope he's able to mediate the meeting of Vader with Obi-Wan (at least to handle whatever Padme can't - though she's not too happy with Obi-Wan either). Please continue!
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