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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Mar 4, 2007 6:04:45 GMT -5
this story is coming along wonderfdully....... Anakin is now in the hands of the emperor and Luke and Leia can sence whenhe's in troubler, I love it! can't wait for more!
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Post by crystalcat on Mar 4, 2007 8:10:01 GMT -5
Eeeek! I missed that you posted a part on Friday and didn't see it until now! (on the positive side, I got to read a very long passage today).
Well, they're finally up to the confrontation. I hope Yoda and the others can get there before the emperor kills Anakin. Great cutaway scene from the fight to the kids - leaving us not knowing if they felt the Sith lightning hit him (which we knew about) or whatever might have come after.
I am concerned, however, that Sidious knows about the kids and the Jedi aren't aware of this knowledge - and now they've left Delaya unguarded. At least Anakin got the clones to give the kids up.
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Post by Annie on Mar 4, 2007 23:32:53 GMT -5
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I LOOOVE the way you wrote Anakin's confrontation with Palps! Ha ha, he's human and whole again and powerful! And don't call me Vader! Very well done!
The kids fear for him, yikes! Now to read the newest update!!
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Post by padme52 on Mar 5, 2007 21:04:37 GMT -5
What a beautifully written story.
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Post by sexystarwarslover on Mar 6, 2007 20:28:21 GMT -5
i loved your story and it was very well written had me on the edge from beginning to end
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Post by Annie on Mar 7, 2007 17:49:27 GMT -5
Yes! Anakin is okay and Palps is dead! I like how everything worked out and I'm happy that Obi-Wan and Dorme' are together and won't have to be alone anymore! I LOVE the ending! A baby Qui-Gon, and the original Qui Gon coming back! They all have so many happy years ahead, and the kids are still little. A sequel based on this scenario, maybe? Please?
Yes, Anakin is the luckiest man in the galaxy, in so many ways! Another excellent piece of work, brilliant, well written, great like the others! Take a bow!
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Post by Astrid on Mar 9, 2007 11:20:12 GMT -5
This was a totally beautiful and good story and I felt good reading it.
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Post by crystalcat on Mar 10, 2007 20:47:43 GMT -5
Nice ending to a really great story. Loved that he named the new babies after his mom and Qui-Gon (and how Qui-Gon visited his namesake). I doled what you posted out so that I only read one chapter per day - at breakfast when I usually only have enough time for one. And I see you're still inspired to write and have started a new story - GREAT!!! I'll be starting that one tomorrow!
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Post by ladykenobi on Mar 18, 2007 11:01:17 GMT -5
I love this story from the beginning to the very end. You never missed a beat. I loved the Padme/Vader/Anakin concept and that she went to him , I do believe that is how it would have happened. The children were his link to his humanity . You did a wonderful job here.  |
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Post by padme on Apr 19, 2007 17:38:37 GMT -5
OOOOOO it's over!!!!!!  I loved this story!!!! Wow! I loved.........well, everything! what a redemtion. I've often wondered what would happen if Vader found out that Padme was really alive. Great!!!!!!!!! Bravo!!!!! I love how Anikan became so much stronger when I finally turned back!!!! Palps scared. Love it! Awesome, awesome, awesome! Now i've got to go find another story! it stinks to finish a story! Keep writing your ideas are great! Got another one in the works yet? |
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