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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Feb 3, 2007 23:27:28 GMT -5
The plot thickens....... hopefully the four of them can kill Palps......
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Post by Astrid on Feb 7, 2007 10:46:58 GMT -5
He's okay, but now he has to face Palps! I'll be worried!
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Post by crystalcat on Feb 8, 2007 20:04:36 GMT -5
Well, well! So Obi-Wan likes Dorme back! This should prove interesting in the upcoming installments!
I'm enjoying the calm before the storm that I know is coming. Wish you could post more often like you used to, but I guess you caught up with where you were writing ...
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Feb 9, 2007 0:21:13 GMT -5
Sweet chapter, I lolve the way the family interacts.... and I'm so glad Obi wan is there also...... I love the way your portray Anakin and Padme as parents..... they are so wonderful at it and the twins are so adorable!
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Post by Astrid on Feb 12, 2007 10:33:00 GMT -5
This is a beautiful story. I like what you are doing with them.
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Post by Annie on Feb 18, 2007 21:11:46 GMT -5
Very nice interaction and dialogue between them, you do it so beautifully! I can just see it. I understand how she feels, he's got his health back and they can have a happy life ahead of them, so why risk getting hurt going after Palps? I'd feel the same way. But he's right, it's his destiny and he'll never be totally safe and free until he does. Interesting how Palps had the babies' birthplace torn up looking for the evidence. Interesting ideas, I like the part about the force and the lake and the pebble in the water!
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Post by Annie on Feb 18, 2007 21:27:55 GMT -5
They're home, and how nice that everyone is friends again! Obiwan and Anakin have made up, and Dorme' is okay with Anakin and Padme forgives her. I must say I would be a little worried about having her around knowing how she doesn't trust Anakin. But maybe if she and Obiwan can hit it off it will all be better! You sure left them all in a cozy situation. I can just see them all warm in their beds, and feeling fine. Very nice, for now. What will happen next? Please post again soon!
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Post by crystalcat on Feb 20, 2007 20:15:16 GMT -5
I loved seeing Sidious get the bejeebers scared out of him by Anakin! It's about TIME!!!. But now I'm worried they'll get found before they're ready. Or that something terrible will happen to Bail and/or Alderaan because he'll discover they were complicit in the cover-up.
At least all the Jedi are back together, and they're talking about re-creating the order, but with a few changes. GOOD! It wasn't love and marriage that screwed Anakin up, it was having to keep it a SECRET!.
I sure miss having you post this every day.
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Feb 21, 2007 0:01:59 GMT -5
great chapter, I'm glad they are home, glad that palps is shaking in his boots, and Yoda meeting the children was awesome!
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Post by Annie on Feb 23, 2007 21:49:03 GMT -5
Oh no, if Luke and Leia are dreaming of Palps hurting their Daddy, and their Daddy had those dreams, I'm worried! I know he has to fulfull his destiny but I hope he, or no one else good, gets killed doing it!
So Yoda accepts the kids and Obi-Wan thinks they will be strong Jedi, this is good. I hope Yoda sees the folly of the old ways and how great it is to have children of Jedi!
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Post by crystalcat on Feb 25, 2007 18:47:16 GMT -5
It's nice to see Obi-Wan finally acclimating to the "New Jedi Order" - glad this is working out for both him and Dorme. And of course I love seeing Palpatine so terrified. But Padme is right - Anakin is certainly not physically ready to fight anyone. At least Palpatine doesn't seem to know this, or he'd be much less scared (though still in a rush). I hope they can go for long enough without the clones finding them - sure gave us all a little scare about the kids, which I suppose is foreshadowing (as was the dream Anakin had way earlier in the story about them being in captivity).
Hope you can post the next chapter soon.
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Post by Annie on Feb 25, 2007 22:54:13 GMT -5
I had almost forgotten about the fact that Anakin is not strong enough to fight yet. Good for Padme for caring and bringing that up. I hope they can stay safe in the meantime. What a nice scene with the kids and the berries. It reminded me of when I picked blackberries with my Dad on my Grandparents' farm. I was worried it might turn scary but I'm glad nothing bad happened- yet!
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Post by padme52 on Mar 1, 2007 22:07:33 GMT -5
I absolutely love this story. You are a great writer and story teller.
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Post by Annie on Mar 2, 2007 21:34:17 GMT -5
The twins are learning the force, and their new skill may be needed if they are in danger, that's a good thing. I am glad to hear the Jedi admit their mistakes and short sightedness!
Oh no, I smell an evil plot! More soon please!
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Post by sonotyourmom on Mar 3, 2007 14:26:32 GMT -5
amazing story i love this story
therealthing and any other writers read my request for a fanfic in the writers cafe and can anyone do it for me? =D it would mean SO much to me
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