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Post by crystalcat on Jan 2, 2007 9:10:45 GMT -5
Why do I still think he and Obi-Wan will arrive together? I can somehow just see them both trying to save the kids from the other one. And am envisioning this stressing Vader out so much that he collapses again in front of his old master?
Looks like this is going to need a password of its own very soon, though. So could you please send it to me via PM (if it's different from the other one) when you password protect it? Thanks!
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Post by therealthing on Jan 2, 2007 12:23:02 GMT -5
I don't plan to make this story M rated (at least not on this site) so there won't be a password.  |
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Post by Annie on Jan 2, 2007 19:51:19 GMT -5
I must say I am disappointed about the hair. I don't like imaging him as a stubblehead and now it will be many months before he's hot again. Hurry and pass, time!!
His condition is still precarious, he will probably have to be careful most of his life? It's sad and scary to think about how he could die so easily. I sure hope he doesn't. It would be so sad now that he's changed.
How sweet, his love for those kids. It's so good to see him have the time with them that he would have missed. They give him strength in all ways. Now he has the power to finally leave Darth Vader behind for the very last time. Good! But will Obiwan and the others ever believe it?
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Post by therealthing on Jan 2, 2007 22:34:10 GMT -5
You'll find out soon enough  |
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Post by crystalcat on Jan 3, 2007 21:50:35 GMT -5
Well, they did manage to make it back before Obi-Wan got there - good for them! But how long do they have before he shows up on the doorstep? For a couple of moments I thought it might be Obi-Wan's ship that was arriving (since he'd been headed for Alderaan to start out with).
I really don't know what they're going to do with Dorme. Sigh. No telling what spin she might put on everything to him if she talks with Obi-Wan alone...
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Jan 4, 2007 1:25:13 GMT -5
such a touching scene when the children saw Anakin! I hope obi wan doesn't spoil everything!
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Post by crystalcat on Jan 5, 2007 17:47:22 GMT -5
I have the feeling the kids are going to have to beg their dad for Uncle Obi-Wan's life ... I don't suppose Bail can keep Obi-Wan away from them ... no, he'd rush there sooner if he knew Anakin was really still alive.
So Dorme's jealous now, hmm? That sounds even worse than before. I can't help feeling that she might become a very big problem...
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Post by DarthAnakin on Jan 6, 2007 12:32:15 GMT -5
nice! i fist read it on ff.net!!!! like really like this story!!!!! cant wait for more!!!!!!!!
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Post by DarthAnakin on Jan 6, 2007 12:32:39 GMT -5
first*
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Post by PadmeSkywalker on Jan 6, 2007 19:34:56 GMT -5
What a beautiful scene Anakin and the twins swimming and playing..... And I laughed out loud of the scene in the tub...... Anakin is so awnry, I could see him starting the splash fight!
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Post by Astrid on Jan 8, 2007 11:11:09 GMT -5
I'm starting on this one now. What an interesting idea and a new twist things that could have happened. I like it that the kids are still young so he won't miss time with them.
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Post by crystalcat on Jan 8, 2007 16:50:50 GMT -5
Well, now I'm not sure what you plan to do with Obi-Wan. He's feeling a bit too confident - surely something is going to happen to stop his forward motion. Bail was being watched by Sidious for any link to the Jedi - is this going to be it? If not, at least he has Nejaa's message to play for Obi-Wan (on the other hand, the message can be used to inform the emperor that Anakin is still alive).
Please write more; this is an amazing story you've got here!
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Post by crystalcat on Jan 10, 2007 18:32:54 GMT -5
Wow, that was a spectacular confrontation. I suspected the twins would do something during it to influence it in Anakin's favor, but I sure didn't expect that! Somehow I don't think you're going to kill him now - and at least Kenobi has learned his lesson - isn't going to try to finish the job or kidnap the kids away. Looking forward very much to where you're going from here!
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Post by Annie on Jan 10, 2007 21:52:46 GMT -5
Oh that was very action packed and emotional. How could Obi-Wan do that? He really still felt he was a danger to the kids? How sad. And now it may be too late. I am furious, and worried. What an awful thing to do, and in his fragile condition. Now his old master has endangered his life once again, but this time, he really was on the right side of the force. At least Obi-Wan feels bad now, but will it be enough? Going into shock is not good:( Hold on, Anakin!
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Post by crystalcat on Jan 13, 2007 9:30:18 GMT -5
It sounds like it's going to be painful and unpleasant for Anakin, but in comparison to what happened to him on Mustafar, it's nothing - at least he isn't going to be put back into the suit.
Padme will be all right once she knows Anakin will be all right. Obi-Wan will still have to live with his actions, but maybe it will help him be less judgmental of the things Vader did. He's going to have a hard time explaining it to the kids though...
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